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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay XD i feel the same way as you do , this pairing IS neglected and needs more love on AFF.NET. dont worry about that review, as i can tell you're not worried at all. Anyway i love your story ! very hot.. hehe and steamy etc. >_< please continue! i cant wait to read some more!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Was I the only one who found that flame amusing? The person's ignorant for a start, not to mention sexist. It does make me giggle when I get reveiws like that (the pro-het ones are just as amusing) Keep your chin up!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey don't let the flames get you down. I and apparently a lot of other people like your story, so who cares what the flamers think. Personally I think your story is a lot of fun. It's got humor and an interesting plot. I like it when people use the existing Yugi storyline and not make up weird situations that would never happen. Plus, the Joey and Mai relationship is classic. You could always feel the tension between them in the show and I think you portray that nicely. Keep up the good work!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I too prefer Jou/Seto, but a 'good' Jou/Mai story is always a welcome read. Hell, Jou/Anybody is great! You are doing a great job
with this story, probably the best J/M story I've read, I look forward to your updates.
with this story, probably the best J/M story I've read, I look forward to your updates.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I HATE FUCKING JOUxMAI stories! They DON'T belong TOGETHER!! got that, freak?! Jounouchi belongs to SETO. YAOI rocks heterosexual ASS!!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read your author's notes ^^ I think I'm in love with you - your ideas about her are along the lines of what I think about her.
My views on Zaira...with any other character, she wouldn't work, but in tandem with Mai, it is pretty damn perfect ^^ Good job.
As for the sex...oh geez; you had Jou's awkward lust and virgin-ness down to a tee.
My views on Zaira...with any other character, she wouldn't work, but in tandem with Mai, it is pretty damn perfect ^^ Good job.
As for the sex...oh geez; you had Jou's awkward lust and virgin-ness down to a tee.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhh finally a mai/joey fic! i know ppl dont like mai but i do! and ir eally DO think mai and joey would make a cute couple~
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwww, even though it's all about sex she's so kind to him. She cares! I like that.
He deserves a good first time! Let's see what comes next...
He deserves a good first time! Let's see what comes next...
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hooohoh! Interesting outcome. Hurry up and put up the next chapter.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was HOT!
I can totally understand why Jou wanted to cry when he heard the knocking... lol
My favorite line in this chapter was: Then... she broke. Sooooooooooooo coooooooool! First of all, I love ellipses (and am probably the only person in this universe who does), second: it's so short and still says all there is to say. It contains the complete atmosphere and emotions and hormones and thoughts and questions and everything there is in that moment in the shortest possible notion. I love it!
Keep going like this. I can't wait to read on!
I can totally understand why Jou wanted to cry when he heard the knocking... lol
My favorite line in this chapter was: Then... she broke. Sooooooooooooo coooooooool! First of all, I love ellipses (and am probably the only person in this universe who does), second: it's so short and still says all there is to say. It contains the complete atmosphere and emotions and hormones and thoughts and questions and everything there is in that moment in the shortest possible notion. I love it!
Keep going like this. I can't wait to read on!