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for Right in a Bad Way

by stetsuntam

person SixDegrees
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Spot-on characterizations, true to the canon, references to YugiOh Season Zero, hot sex scenes, realistic and non-corny. Brilliant!
person ChocoCheese
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great story, and I really don't mind the pairing, because IMHO it is one of the most canon ones in the show :D
person joey fan
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what do you mean white:certainly not Varon, Otogi, or Kaiba, either
he is way hotter then them
did you see his blond hair and he is not so pointy drawn as the others
he is the most hot persen of hole yu gi oh and evrywhan than cant see that is blind
but ferther i like your story
person legacy
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!...plz. O.O
person Kathleen
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just found this fic today after finally dragging myself to AFF hoping to finding something good and I found this fic. I love it. Like you, I'm a huge fan of KaiJou (it's just to hot) and yaoi in generally, but i love this pairing most because it is "cannon" (or as canon as it'll get). I love the way you portray both characters and the plot in general is fantastic. Can't wait until Chapter 8. ^_~
person deadlybeautygoddess
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww that was so sweet ^_^ i loved it so much... this was just.... there isn't enough words in the english language to explain how much i loved this.... i know you must think i'm crazy but i loved ur story. truely i did... you did a wonderful job of protraying everyone. There aren't very many mai x joey stories on this site, and their not a fav couple... but i love them anyway. I am oppsessed and probably shouldn't be so anime crazed but i am... so anywayz i loved ur story. great ending.
person deadlybeautygoddess
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey it's me again! i love your story and let me just say that it's not a bad thing that u made a oc coz it fits. yeah i think mai should have at least one friend too... Anzu as well, i think if she had a girl friend then maybe ppl wouldn't hate her as much and call her slut and all that.... o look at me rambling on and on.... ok anywho i love this stoy and i'm sad that there's only one chapter left coz i love this story. ~ bye
person deadlybeautygoddess
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. I love Mai x Joey stories coz they belong together... it's so obvious ^_^ anywho... i'm gonna keep reading and add this story to my recomended reading section~ bye
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so hilarious. omg i loved how jonouchi 'accidently' took her panties. Lol that was pure genius right there... anywho u got great writing skills.... i love mai x joey pairings and i love this story. ~bye
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!!! just had to say it! you know i love it and mai x joey stories ^_^ ~ bye