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for With You

by Kugatsu

person Velvetina
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*galres* whoever the hell has dared put you down must face my wrath!!! bastards. I hate it so much when people read a whole story then review bitching about it, I'm like why did you read it if you don't like it. Ah screw 'em theres loads of us out there who love you including moi. Thankies for the mention by the way. I feel so sorry for Dartz its gotta suck having your heart crushed, espesh when you're that you but personally I feel evem more sorry for darling Peggy...hehe Peg-chan! I mean Datz understandbly is biased but why can't he understand that some people need time to mature...AND what if he and Peegy had stayed together and he'd never met Ryou. Oh well I know that it'll turn out good in tehe nd, I'm sure that Peggy will end up with Rapheal and everything will be hunkeydory...thats a fun word. Anyways as ever I love you and you work and once again tell anyone who disses you in teh slightest I will be after them with my pet mokeys mwahahah...lol XX
person Velvetina
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH updateidge!!!! *runs around* sorry I'm on this medecation which makes me go hyper. I cracked up so much when Bakura was like 'I created a child'. and poor poor innocent Ryou...though not for much longer *grin*. le gasp right back atcha! Come on you have to tell us why does Dartz hate Peggy so much? Aww poor Rapheal is kinda caught in the middle, hes drawn to Peggy but is best mates wth Dartz, what a confusing predicement. You update early in the morning? The question is, is that your early morning or mine because I'm based in England. Anyway as ever I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter. SQEEE! XXX
person ~!~Adam~!~
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, don't listen to people like JELL-O, you're every avid readers dream, great work without the long wait of updates! Keep up the great writing!

~!~Adam~!~
person Ghost Dragon
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You are a great writer, I have nere seen Pairings like these and thier all so great! I hope to see more of your storys!
person Anon
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're a lovely writer, and I love how often you update. Please don't let complaints about stupid things like pairings upset you. Don't stop writing your sweet stories, please!
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh so that's what happened... ouch! >< what a way to break up. and hamster cap cute!! i want a bunny cap and ooh a bat cap! what? i want a baseball cap wiht bat ears! i can be bat kid! *giggles* or i could jsut tie kura's hair and die hte bands black *glomps him and seto happily* i love these boys!
on a serious note, i wish i had your level head. u have a point about thsoe that flamed ur story but u didn't lsoe your cool. i really admire that. but u know, they wanna be close minded ass holes let them. thanks for hte shout-out too. see we absolutely lvoe ur story! besides, the pairings in the pair are overused so muhc it's getting to be a damn cliche. urs is original and i like that :) keep up hte really great work ya hear?
person ~!~Adam~!~
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..its been said before, the pairing are really weird, not natural at all, but wow, you make it seem natural and just so much fun, like it should be like that. It's really cool and breaks away from a lot of the hikari/yami fics. Not bashing them cause I love them to bits but it goes against the tide and you pull it off! I really want to see where the whole Pegasus/Raphale (I know I probably spelt those wrong) thing goes! Plus Dartz and Ryou seem really cute together! Keep going against the tides and claim the island everyone seems to be leaving as your own because you dominate the weird pairings! :p I look forward to more chapters and hopfully more stories!
person crimsoncoral
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't mean to take sides but I think what Jell-O said was pretty much uncalled for. Well that's just in my opinion. For what it's worth I didn't think you did that on purpose, people just change their minds... that's life. Anyway, I’m going to read the new chapter now. So I’ll just tell you in advance: great chapter!! (Have a habit of reading the “authors' notes” before hand.)
Ciao-ciao
person BlacKat
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO close Dartz so close!...and in the limo too XP! And Pegasus being in love?...Pffthahaahahahahaahaha...makes me laugh. SO anyways does that mean since Pegasus is staying with Ryou for awhile, Ryou's got a new ROOMATE! Let the chaos insue!
Can't wait for the next chappie!^_^Update as SOON as YOU can!
person Jell-O
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks to my friend Heike for pointing me there was a message for me. No I wrote in naruto fandom, Gundam Wing, Weiss Kreuz, Saiyuki, Harry Potter. But only big archive site I ever published was DA (not there any longer), people's personal sites (special people only) and some mailing lists and of course, LJ. Never touched AFF or FF for publishing :/ Besides I write and read only during periods : the ones I am not sent here and there for work.
But I never said "bye bye" hoping to be praised and begged to come back, only to reappear when it was done. I do not critic the writing style because we're all different and all styles appeal to some people. I meant you were a joke in the general attitude. Jaa ne. Oh and don't bother to leave more message. We're not there to start a war but publish.read/give opinions. You've got your other happy reviewers to take care of. *I* am out now.