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for The sound of pain

by crimsoncoral

person YamiKuro
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it...but...i don't understand...were Bakura and Marik his slaves or something? Please explain! :)

Kuro
person SilentScreams_00
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow........................you want me to be honest with you, huh? This has got to be the most disturbing S&M fic i have ever read. I have read alot of them too mind you, and god this takes the cake. I don't even wanna know where you got the idea's for this from...and if you are like this and actually enjoyed typing this then, i think you should maybe talk to someone about it. I mean wow......scary stuff you got here.(Needles?! That's just wrong!!!) I also didn't know what was going on most of the time. But whatever, see you later.
person miku
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know that this is a one ahot but i would love it if you could possibly do another story or continue this and see how the other characters act to yugi acting ths wayas it was exelent. If you feel like it ofc ourse. i thought that this was absolulty spectacular, i don't tend to read this style of fan fic but it captivated me xxx thankyou so much for writing this xxxx oh, and good use of pins /\_~
person miku
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to bother you again but i want to apologise for my terrible spelling in the last review, i am shamed that i didn't spell check it first 0__0 /\__/\