rate_review Reviews

Such a sweet and sad story. I'm glad Serenity and Mokuba are together and joey and Seto found each other.

WELL, I'M A LITTLE SATISFIED.

BUT NOT THAT SATISFIED.

Sry I am to sad to sign in but that was so great it made me laugh and cry God I hope I find love like that but i guess only so many people are that lucky huh? Well keep writing you have excellent talent and i am writing way too long of a review.
your Fan,
KittyN

Very cute alternate ending! Seto's right; there's nothing with gay couples adopting! I am both appalled and ashamed to lay claim to the fact that I am a Texas resdient since they passed a law this past few months banning adopting rights to gay couples...>_<...I am just so infuriated that our state reps are fucking ignorant assholes, it makes me want to puke! Anwyay, just wanted to say that I enjoyed both endings! Can't wait to read your next story!

Hmmm...my review was cut short...just wanted to say that I enjoyed both endings and I can't wait to read your next insallment!...Also, was re-reading my previous review and...O.O...I don't know what I was ranting about in the end there; my humor was obviously replaced by my delirium and lack of sleep so I openly apologize...anyhoo, see ya in another fanfic! Ja!

that was so sad but I loved it I cried but to answer the question of would you. You know how the saying goes it is better to have lost love then to never have loved at all. well good-bye

The second one, I don't see Kaiba as a type that commits suicide.

Greets
Kat

Though it pains me to see the madman won in the end, I guess it's consolation that they get to be together in the afterlife; of course, that's only because Seto committed suicide...'o.o...very tragic...anyhoo...just wanted to let you know that i rather liked the ending...though it's a shame they didn't get to enjoy their bonded life together, it's nice to see a Seto/Joey story in which they can still be together beyond mortal realms...I know I'm ranting...it's 2:30 AM, after all, but I just wanted to let you know that though there were times in the story that felt a little unneccessary (i.e. bringing in a wonderful, dynamic character, Erin Smith, only to reneg her potential and have her do nothing but what was assumed of her) or magically resolved (i.e. the return of Joey at Christmas after he found out what Michelle and Tristan were up to and have them suddenly giving a shit what Seto was threatening them with), the end result was just as poinant as the beginnning... ^_^...very tired...not sure if review is up to par...last note, you are a good dancer!..j/k..you are a great writer, so hope to hear another Seto/Joey fic! Ja!....O-O