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by Crystal56

person Zoe
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* It's most definately an incredible start! ^__^ I love it, and pregnant Yami makes me laugh. And yes, there are -way- too many Yugi-gets-pregnant stories. This is the first one I've read where Yami gets pregnant, and it's quite a nice change. ^__^ I can't wait for the birth...
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: yup another good story to ad to ur collection Crystal huh but i cant tell who i feel sry for for jou cuz hes got four problems to worry about being gay liking seto kaiba school and his sister heh and then we have seto kaiba CEO of kaiba corp only living guardian/brother/family member to mokuba and who likes jou in return but has problems dropping the habit and yes kaiba repeadedly going at someone again and again and again without even putting too much effort into it is called a habit a routine your so dead used to teasing taunting and mocking jou u dont know when to NOT mock him or teas or taunt him and Yugi is right ya know if u keep that up it limits your chances even furtherin getting jou to like ya let alone admit that he may like you more then just as a crush cuz after all theres a fine line between love and hate and the two of them are definitly at that border line now the just both need a shove into right side of the line i wish the two of u luck on that one heheh and poor yami the pangs of bringing life into this world cant say i know entirely what thats like but im sure with the sickness mood swings and the over all grand slam finale with the birth of that child its going to be a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong haul for him hehe and yugi try to be patient with him when he snaps ok its not you nor him its his horomones going haywire on him well gtg now crystal keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^