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for Broken Dragon

by Crystal56

person huntershivers
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
maaaaaahn! You're right! Your cliffies driving me nuts!
And it was so short *sniffles* But I enjoyed it anyway... -_-
I hope the next chapter will come sooner than this one, but I am afraid you will put on a much worse cliffie just to punish me for pushing you to write faster *starts to sob*
I want the neeeeeeeeeeeeeext oooooneeeeeeeee *totally freaks out and leaves a big sea of tears in the review room*
person jousetoyaoifan
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welllll........the first chapter was kinda slow, but i think that almost always happens in the first chapter of almost every fanfic
person huntershivers
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally!
I like Seto being punished, but I hope it won't be really forever... 'cause Jous Puppydogeyes wouldn't work if the Dragon couldn't see them...
I'm looking forward to the next chapter cause while I read, I got the feeling the chapter was a little short =/

But I am REALLY glad that there was one at last ^^ *is too curious for her own good*
person Dark Mistress a.k.a. Sadistic Suicidal Teen
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KEWL!!!!



I like this chapter.




Can't wait for more!
person Angel Kawaii
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow it finally happened. I wonder how long this will last... Great chappie though and please update soon! Ja ne! ^____^
person Seth
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it! i love how its going!! i just can't wait till the next chapter is up!!...please please please!!..send me a email when the next chapter is up! i want to be one of the firsts ones to read it please! its really good! You are doing a great job, and i am really enjoying it! Seto and Joey is mt fav!!...>.
person huntershivers
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oww...
Just fell about the fact that I totally forgot to give a review...
I love your sequel ^-^
I just love kaiba being that... clumsy when it comes to the task be nice to the puppy *evilgrin*
and... i don't know... I kinda... like Kana *more evil grin*
She likes to punish the Pharao, but she does not bash... she just likes to torture him ^_________^
And I like to read that *laughs like she's mad*
Hope I get the chance to read the next chapter soon ;-)
person Zoe
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The only thing I hate about you is this cliffhanger. XDXD That was a really good twist...^__^; Poor Kaiba! ...even though he deserves it. *cough* >>
person Sadistic Suicidal Teen
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
technically I don't hate you but I do. It's hard to explain.
I want to read more. That Kana is a real bitch alright. She took his Eye sight
person Angel Kawaii
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Ra!! Yes you're going to break Kaiba!! lol Oh please I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! Wow Kana is to be hated. Who wouldn't hate that bitch! lol Great chappie it had me jumping in my seat. PLease update soon!! Ja ne! ^^