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for Broken Dragon

by Crystal56

schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know when the last time you updated this but i hope up you update again soon
person S'Star
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please write more this is really good and I want to know whats going to happened next.
person Draghaii_Atemu
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay pregnant Yami! ^^ I love this story! *Holds out pocky* ^-^
person Shadow
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i doubt anyone is mad that you took long to update, its worth waiting for! plese update again soon though!
person ShadowRaven
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could you be so cruel! **sniffs** You made Seto blind!!! God he has a company to run and about a million other things to do!!
How could you. **crying** Welll, *sniff* you could at least UPDATE, in at least a few days to show everybody that you actally have a Heart! And when you complete this interesting story, MAKE IT A HAPPY ENDING! Please.! ^.^ Make your fans happy. ^_^
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How about "blowing chunks"? (I heard that one on "Family Feud" once!)
person Huntershivers
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oweeeeeh finally a new chapter!
And a poor pharao still fighting with the food <=(
Hope it will go on soon, cause I've already feared you dropped that story @.@

LG Shi
person crazyb1tch85@hotmail.com
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
como to think about it, Yami's been the one who's had it most rugh. First, en Egypt he used to be a lonely and too young pharaoh, no family no sh*t; then he is sealed inside a puzzle for 3000 (or 5000) years in absolute darkness (plus he forgets his past); then when he's finally released he has to fight all this crazy motherf*ck*rs for world's sake, third when he finally regains his memories he has to leave his love (yeah yugi, doesn't matter what anybody says, they're a frgging couple in the anime); when he's finally back he has only one month to confess to yugi or he'll die, and now he has to go trough pregnancy???

......

honestly, I've been thinking a LOT and Yugi should have been the one who got pregnant (although at the beginning i thought it was a good turn of events), just because Yami's got the wrost luck in the world ^^U
person Cynthia
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent and creatively written! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE add more. lol It really is imaginative (my spelling is horrid, I know) lol....continue on. Great story!
*Cynthia*
person Seth
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THE STORY!! it is coming out to be great! you have to let me know when the next charpter is coming up! PLEASE!! PLEASE!!!! i really want to know what is going to happen next!! really! it just, its just so so cool!! i wanted to read the next chapters to come up! please let me know! i want to know what is going to happen. Plus the strory is well writen and has good details. You are a good writer, really you are. Can, you please let me know when the next one is coming up? I will be looking forward to it really!

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