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for Pleasure is Business

by Aaries

person Kari
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a quick update, gotta love that. ^_^ You two(?) mentioned the word 'comphort' several times, but it´s really spelled 'comfort'. Sorry for bringing up these small errors, I´m just addicted to good spelling. XD

Great second chapter, I love how we get to see the situation from everyone´s point of view. It´s a good way to get to know all the important characters and like them. ^_^ I´m looking forward to reading more.
person RYOU MOON
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So love it update very soon please and thank you!!!
person Kari
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You probably already know this, but you (accidentally) mispelled the title. ^_^ It´s 'business', not buisness'.

*is in awe* That was an excellent first chapter, I absolutely -love- it. You have to write more, it´s too good not to be continued. o_o I can´t wait to see more action on Ryou´s, Yugi´s and Malik´s parts. *is excited* I´ll be waiting anxiously for the next part!

I checked out your Favorites list and it´s almost funny, but we seem to have the exact same taste in fics. We certainly have good taste. XD
person kupo
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is cool!!! The different POV did make it more intrusting. Update soon!
person Kat1132
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I can't wait for more to arrive. Please post chapter 3 soon!
person Elia
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You! NOOOOOOOO stoppie! This story was good and entertaining. You shouldn''t leave a good story with 1 chapter! AH~øHell can't amount to the fury I holdø~
person Camille
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I've read this before. I never saw anything since. Please continue.

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