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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snaps fingers* COntinue!
I like it. Suspenseful
I like it. Suspenseful
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review earlier, but my brain was in a catatonic state of bliss from reading all the fluffy smut....And I had to go buy a new keyboard as my old one shorted out from all the drool! ^_^
I just want to say, this was my reaction to the first chapter: ^_^
Reaction to second: o.O
Reaction to third: O.O
Reaction to fourth: ^_______________________________________________________^
And this is my current reaction: >.< WRITE MORE NOW, DAMN IT!! Or I'll spork your eye out and lick it with Bakura, like an ice cream cone!! And we's likes ice cream coneses!!
I just want to say, this was my reaction to the first chapter: ^_^
Reaction to second: o.O
Reaction to third: O.O
Reaction to fourth: ^_______________________________________________________^
And this is my current reaction: >.< WRITE MORE NOW, DAMN IT!! Or I'll spork your eye out and lick it with Bakura, like an ice cream cone!! And we's likes ice cream coneses!!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! You've really drawn me in. I'm especially interested in the Yugi/Ryou relationship.
I've noticed some spelling errors (e.g., "comphortable" instead of "comfortable"). I'd be happy to do a grammar/spelling check for you, if you'd like. =)
I've noticed some spelling errors (e.g., "comphortable" instead of "comfortable"). I'd be happy to do a grammar/spelling check for you, if you'd like. =)
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Howdey.
Liked it, loved it. Can't wait to read more and a question
if I may. Does Bakura love them equally or love one more than the others?
Please update soon.
Liked it, loved it. Can't wait to read more and a question
if I may. Does Bakura love them equally or love one more than the others?
Please update soon.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I can wait a month for the next chapter of this. ;) Don't worry about the lemon; you did a fine job. I feel so sorry for Ryou being as young as he is and born into the slave trade... Malik seems to be quite the protector. This is a fine fanfiction! I hope you get settled into your new home soon! (I know how exciting moving house is, but very distrupting!)
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^w^ eee! <3
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats pretty good for your first lemon, alot of the time they are realy poorly done. Im not to sure about next chapter, yuris not really my thing...but it you want to write it, i'll just skip that chapter. You guys are the authors here right? I hope you update soon ^^
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! update soon please and thank you!!!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you like, I'd be willing to try beta-ing the story for you. Please contact me at sailormoon@talk21.com to let me know if you would be interested.
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At first I wasnt sure about your fic, what with them being so young and all...........but its horribly addicting!! I hope you update soon!