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by Kugatsu

person RYOU MOON
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! love it!! love it!! keep going and update soon!!!
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait wait wait a sec, Dartz is hte secretly admirer?? *blinks, thinks it over, blinks again, smiles* I think they would make a cute couple. And Ryou, hell yeah he has every right to blow up at them! Shit if I was him I would have punched htem in hte face and kicked htem in hte crotch until I got tired! They don't take care of him they use him like a slave. And his father, bah! Insensitive jackass. I hope a tomb smashes his head like an overripe watermelon!! ... after Ryou finds out that it's Dartz who sent those oh so lovely letters. Anyway, very nice chapter. And seto is being nice but, arg! *threatens to rip hair out* I wish those assholes would pay for treating Snow Bunny like that!! Okay I better stop, I'm getting a headache. Again I do love your story and hope that this ends on a happy note. Oh, and that those lazy SOBs learn their fraking lesson. If not... *grins evilliy as she revs up a chain saw* I can always remove their reason for being a 'male' in hte physical sense. Laterz!
person Chisisi
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't stop saying 'kawaii' while reading it! I just...can't! ^.^
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg how romantic!!! ryou is one lucky guy to have such a romantic admirer! and way to go telling those assholes off! this bunny has hidden claws! *giggles* ooh i love jumping on beds so much fun jsut don't fall off. and amelda broke up wiht yami? ... eh like i care about mr 'thinks he's all that asshole'. anyway, i love this story thanks so much for sharing!! *hugs* i can't wait for the rest!!
person Yamima
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOw great new chapter I loves it!
person BlacKat
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yippie! A new chapter!^_^Can't wait for the next one! UPdate soon!
person Kat1132
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like I said before, this is a great story. Thanks for updating so quickly, do you think you could do it again? I can't wait to see what will happen next. I just don't understand how everyone could be so caught up in their own lives not to notice that Ryou goes through hell every day. Oh well, such is life I guess. I hope that he begins to leave them as they left him for this other person. I can't wait!
person Velvetina
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Schwarzwald you are surely the most awsome writer around at the minute and we should all bow down to your amazingness...hmm I really ought to start using real words. Anyways I still reckon Ryou's guy is Dartz...the most recent clue was the mention of Atlantis in the letter. Argh I'm actually dying with anticpation too see if I'm right. I so totally love the letters that are being sent to Ryou *sigh* so romantic, makes a girl wish there were actually guys like that out there...that aren't gay anyway. I also have this overwhelming urge to beat up Bakura, Malik and Marik. I love them dearly but they are SO creul to Ryou. Why can't they see he needs some TLC, stupid bishies too wrapped up in their own lives to give a damn about the cute little chibi. But seriously i meant what I said earlier, you are easily the best Yugioh writer taht I'm reading at the moment, you actually have a awsome plot line and keep me on the edge of my seat to find out what the hell is gonna happen, I come on here specifically to see if you've updated, whereas with others I come on and its like, oh they've updated may read that in a moment, and their plot line is just so flat and predictable. Seriously i never want this series to end. Can't wait for the next update
person Wicabeth
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou. I've been enjoying your stories, especially this one. Sadly enough, I can sympathize with Ryou and how he's overlooked and belittled. I just wish I had someone leaving me love letters to make it better.
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor ryou. first that was incriedible sweet adn romantic!! bakura, some yami! i don't care if he does have a bf that asshole should elarn some damn manners!! and ryou's father!! *fuming* ooh he talks to him like that again and i'll freaking torture him until he loses his sanity!! if i ever marry and my partner speaks to my son/daughter/child that wasy i will persaonlly kick their ass until their apologize and keep kciking their ass up and down hte block then shove them headfirst in a sewer!! *clams down* hey, i love books and i was a push over but u push me to far and i will try to kill you. anyway i'm gald to see this updated. poor ryou needs some love to. he's my snow bunny!! *huglles him tightly*