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for Ha ha You Lose

by FlufftheMagicPharoh

person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: *colapes on her back laughing hysterically* ooh boy that was a good chappie hehe great job Fluff but i bet yami wishes he didnt do that to yugi now cuz surely someones going to pu the moves on him and i know yami wont take it lightly hehe well keep up the great work fluff oh and yami come one when u want to make someone pay do it right like this * rushes at the bullies bunches a guy so hard his neck nearly snaped then she swung around and punched the other on hard in the stomach and elbowed him in the back as he was falling and the last two came charging at her she ducked down and then swung her feet up kicking them in the head then grabs said heads and bashes them together then waits as they get up and flee leaving a cloud of dust in there wake* see thats how u teach a bully a lesson hehe well gtg now JA NE ^__^
person Paulina
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey ther, I LOVE that Yami, please go on, its ineresting your idea, how much will you do?
person Sarah Costa
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Way a go Yami!! He should beat the guys even more. Only Yami can touch yugi. I can't wait to see what happen next. Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne
person Yamima
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet of Yami update soon!
person Arainaina
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please update soon I wish to see what Yami has planned for Yugi
person just_me
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very short, very funny. Can't wait to read more. Poor Yugi. *snicker*
person Riana
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A description would have made it better. What's Yami going to do to Yugi next
person Sarah Costa
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA...Yugi is a girl now and Yami will have is fun. Please update soon. Ja ne
person Yamima
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! I would like to see where this is going, is he really obeying the penalty game or does he want a little 'hoo ha'?
person kupo
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol Oh my god sex change!!!! Yugi acually would be kinda cool as a girl. update soon!!!!!