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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
[snort... sknicker... gigle]... BWAA HA HA HA. OMFG, Kagashi-sensei? That's brilliant! Oh, no way Kaiba could bribe that man. Although, I'm having trouble envisoning him without the forhead protector. But I can totally see him setting Kaiba and Jou up.
(writing this review as I read it) Mmm, strong fingures and palms, nice imagery there.
[eyes widening comically] I don't believe it. Mud wrestling? Oh, where's my camera!
Kowaii, that cute picture of the puppy holding the dragon's leash.
Yumm, it's nice to see Jou seme for once. And that was a cute ending. Thanks for the wonderful story, keep it. up.
(writing this review as I read it) Mmm, strong fingures and palms, nice imagery there.
[eyes widening comically] I don't believe it. Mud wrestling? Oh, where's my camera!
Kowaii, that cute picture of the puppy holding the dragon's leash.
Yumm, it's nice to see Jou seme for once. And that was a cute ending. Thanks for the wonderful story, keep it. up.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I suppose it got decidedly OOC towards the end there, but it was still good. ^_^
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whistles happily* yay lemon time and jou got to be on top! you don't witness that every day ^^ this was cool, u even got me inspired to draw again. thanks so much for sharing again!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally kawaii! That was a gorgeous fanfic! And a yummy lemon to boot! Can't wait to see more fanfics from you!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate to nitpick, but if their teacher is suppose to be the same character from Naruto (which I'm positive he is - right?), it's actually spelled "Kakashi." I'm sorry, but I just wanted to point it out.
Love this! I can't wait for the next update [especially if it's going to be a lemon ~_^]. It's always nice to see Jou being good at something.. I like fics where he's good at art. Seems pretty likely that he'd be the artistic type.
Love this! I can't wait for the next update [especially if it's going to be a lemon ~_^]. It's always nice to see Jou being good at something.. I like fics where he's good at art. Seems pretty likely that he'd be the artistic type.
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, this was cute. When I first read the name "Kagashi" I saw it as "Kakashi" which I'm assuming that's who he is modeled after... with that book of his. Is it for people over 18? Hehe.
Anyways, I loved all the technical info on the clay modeling, and Seto naming his laptop was amusing. Great story. Well written and fun to read!
Anyways, I loved all the technical info on the clay modeling, and Seto naming his laptop was amusing. Great story. Well written and fun to read!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...I'm sure glad you are a fast updater, otherwise I would definitely hounding you for more info! See you in the next chapter, which hopefully sports a major lemon!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice fan fic
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! And so quickly, too! *drools over the prospect of upcoming lemon* ^_^
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
again u have done ur homework. mud fight!! man i wihs i had joey's artistic talent. i draw, i paint, but nothing i do can even compare!! anyway, this is good and sometimes tell me the lemon is gonna be coming up soon. yay!! more please soon please!!