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person zombiedarkelf18
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yah i'd love to see jou in india's hat drools
cool story
person miharu
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm an indiana fan and yu-gi-oh as well. the chapter 5 can`t be the end. I mean, seto and jou definitly need to get laid.... would grant my wish?
good luck for the future
miharu
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that was funny :) the last lines made me laugh! this was good. i hope hte last chap is a lemon between joey and seto! *giggles insanely*
person Xiaolang\'s Ying Fa
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was so freaking bitchen~!! At first when i saw this fic, i was like...Indiana Jones...Eh....But now!!! Wow! Its so original too! That was so cool! You just keep coming up with these awesome plot ideas, and I'll be sure to keep reading!!!

Update soon please!!

Love,
Xiaolang's Ying Fa
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh so close!! that was good though i was worried for a sec ^^ man i forgot how much i liked hte indiana jones movies. so there's more to those things than meets hte eye. heh coolness! this is gonna be fun but i also so cannot wait for hte lemon! woohoo!!
person Tamlin
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the most origional stories I've read! Absolutly great! I love Yugi as the side kick and Kaiba as the damsel in distress. I can't wait till you update. I don't suppose you're planning a sequel????
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... u did ur homework! i like it it was funny to read when they began wrestling about earlier. and yugi so cute! u have my hook so i gotta read hte rest!!
person tash922
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u got to continue
.... are yugi and yami going to be together?
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh i admit at first i wasn't ahppy but i like it! some damsel in distress ^^ *snickers* i gotta read more plz!!
person SW
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The title may be cheezy as you say, but it did catch my attention. And I liked the story, so I'm glad it did. (I'm also a fan of Indiana Jones movies - although the fighting could be a little less - so I guess that helped a bit too. ^^) Poor Jou, he doesn't really have his day. Or week? I'm curious what will happen next, so please update.