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for What Were You Doing??

by YamiJounochi

person RayeMoon
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, this was pretty cute, though I find it hard to believe any 15-year-old (or he may be older) like Yugi wouldn't know what sex is. Still, a very cute idea and I thought it was funny. Pity you don't have Seto Kaiba teaching that adorable creature just what they were doing. Jaa.
person BEWD Sorcerer
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*lmao* And Seto Kaiba says, "Come here; let me show you." *cackling* I can't wait to read that. ^.^
person HJ11
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhh.......come on u gotta upd8 soon dis is to good!!!
person Ima
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! And it was good!
person Mr.D
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it please write more
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS TERRIBLE!! oops sorry just kiddin that was awesome sorry for the twisted sense of humour i was mean...er...will Yugi and Yami get together?? or is that just one of my deluded fantasies? continue?
person akuma_river
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, sorta.

I am always up for a Seito/Yugi fic. Not too many of those.

I read this one vamp au fic, with a dark Seito/Yugi pairing, and I can't turn back now. Dang.

So when I find a Seito/Yugi fic, I am usually a fan. But like I said before, not too many of those. To find a good fic, I think I have found maybe five.

Keep up the great work. Coolsa.

So Yugi doesn't know about sex? Geez I knew when I was six (knew about the workings of it). Me and some other kids where the ones telling the dirty jokes, and I read medical books. Don't really give you anything on the stork. lol
person ...
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the hell? No offense but don't you think that Yugi would already know what sex is? I mean 10 year olds know what sex is.
person Money Madness
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Critic, please do us all a favor and stop writing if you are going to put crap like this up.
person yellow bastard
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the lemon was good, but I don't think that Yugi would be THAT innocent! How old is he anyway? 16 or something? At that age you know what sex is and how it is performed at least in theory.
Besides that little detail, the story was pretty good.