schedule
May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This *was* labled NC-17, now wasn't it? oO Honestly, this isn't even R.
I don't mind this kind of stuff, I just don't read it.
You rushed too much during the end - if you wanted them to kiss you could have written it just like that.
Seriously, try to find a page that encourages PG-stuff. -.-
I don't mind this kind of stuff, I just don't read it.
You rushed too much during the end - if you wanted them to kiss you could have written it just like that.
Seriously, try to find a page that encourages PG-stuff. -.-
schedule
May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I enjoyed this very much. Good job with integrating the lyrics.
schedule
May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good ... those are real lyrics ? dambn I'll be getting them soon :P
schedule
May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please say you're writing more? I want Seto to witness a concert or something cool!! I'd like to hear Joey sing 'Power Within.' I wonder if Seto would catch the hint? XD
schedule
May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting great job keep it up
schedule
May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww
so sweet
i really liked it
but is there gonna b a lemon? or is it finished?
i thought it was excellent, write more!!!
so sweet
i really liked it
but is there gonna b a lemon? or is it finished?
i thought it was excellent, write more!!!
schedule
May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute one-shot...or is it? You can't find a more adorable couple! And are those actual lyrics to a song? Kuddos to the writer! It's really good!