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for You Can Do That

by Kugatsu

person Rachel Dracon
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Ryou's pretty fucked up, when he first said he stabbed himself I thought he was just covering for Bakura. But he actually believes that? Dude... so you don't know where the story's gonna go from here? Mur, personally I'd like to see Ryou/Bakura since I'm not fond of the Bakura/Seto pairing, but whatever feels right for you, it's your writing. Heh, looks like Yami's back to snatching information out of Yugi's head. And Yugi didn't seem at all pleased about that. Malik hasn't shown up in a while, wonder how he's coping. Gah, lurve you and your mighty fast updates! *glomp* ^.^
person Starwarrior
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay... that didn't really interest me too much, but it was a good chapter, keep up the good work! ^.^
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my, god.
This is the single most heart-wrenching fic I have ever read.
I cannot BELIEVE...I can't even DREAM of Bakura saying that to Malik!
Oh my god! I would go insane too! Holy crap! I'll be in shock for the rest of the day!!
So now it seems like all the relationships are in jeopardy. I do hope the Bakura/Malik pairings stays, though. It's one of my favorite pairings!
PLEASE update soon. I'm begging you! I gotta know what happens! PLEEASE!!!
person Zacarane
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Poor Bakura! Please don't let it be a YamixRyou pairing! BakuraxRyou is so sweet! And poor Malik! Get him a love interest! ^^ How about a MarikxYugixMalik?! Just a suggestion! ^^ Anyway please continue soon!
person Starwarrior
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story was soo sad at first! And what about Seto? What's going to happen to him? Anyway, I started reading your story today, the other one, which this one is a squeal to. It's very good, though I'm not sure about the Marik and Yugi relationship, but I love it when he gets smack by Yugi, or gets a clock thrown at him! ^___^ That's sweet, it's very rare, that anyone can get me to read a marik and yugi fic. Keep up the good work
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey its me again I LOVE THIS SEQUEL!! its awesome! I havern't actually threatemted you with my wrath yet have I? well seeing as this made me happy I won't....for now *evil smirks* MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Rachel Dracon
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, sequel came out fast! Damn, he was really fuckin' cruel to Malik. Ah, side effects to being yami and hikari, must be freaky to suddenly feel your other half going through that. Man Seto's kinda... weird... is this gonna be a Bakura/Seto? There was definitely something weird with Bakura and Seto in the first story, even if it only happened once. Heh, sounds like Yugi's really lost all respect for his yami, I almost feel bad for Yami. But then, not really, I believe in holding a grudge. Wonder what will happen when Ryou gets in to see Bakura... ah, update again when you can! ^.^
person Rachel Dracon
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaahhh... ? In the last chapter Bakura was completely fucked up and thinkin' about leaving the country. Now he's... eh, I guess it'll be explained later. Kinda sad that Seto can't let go of Yugi. And this is looking more and more like a Seto/Bakura story. Bummer. Whatever works for your writing I suppose. Wish I could write a little more, but my roomie is on case.
person Zoe
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^____________^ I loved it! You're so awesome...four chapters and a sequel in one day. @_@ *worship*