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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, the story I thought was going to be interesting, until about 3 sentences in you did annoying little parenthasis and added your two cents about how little you know about the anime/manga. If you don't know something, then google it, if you don't care about being Canon, then state so in the beginning, don't add little Author Notes in the middle of the story. Especially if it's just to say that you like ending paragraphs in dots. Makes the story lose its flow and makes you seem really childish and unprofessional. Makes me not want to read on to be honest. Do a little editing and state opinions at the beginning or the end of a story, not in the middle.
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that's actually really really good!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its kickass
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...go, Ryou! And poor Bakura...I know he deserves it but I love them as a couple! Can't wait to see the outcome! Please update and good luck!