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for The Secret

by freewater

person vampslyr
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ne, too bad, but it is your story. I shall eagerly await the unfolding of your vision ;-). Please don't keep us in suspence too long. I just know Joey's going to have to hurt Duke when he tries to cop a feel or something.
person zombiedarkelf18
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool another story i love your writing i'm so glad you posted another one.
can't wait to see what happens when duke and joey dance
hows kaiba gonna take it
:) update soon
person yami990
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please. hmm i wonder what devilin is going to try with joey?
person takkycat
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy...Joey certainly gets himself in fixes, doesn't he? I can't wait to see what's next! *in an old radio kinda voice* Will Duke realise who Joey is? Does Joey even know how to dance? Will Kiaba burst a vein before he even gets to second base?!
person tash922
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it. its great story poor joey he/she's stuck dancing with duke am dieing with suspences
please update really really soon ^_^
person XD
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing. You oughta get paid for it. Very funny, yet throughly naughty. continue!
person SW
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved that part when Yami showed up all the way 'till the part where Joey and Kaiba walked away! It was really funny.
Nyaha, I want a Blue Eyes Ultimate plushie too. ^^
person Draza
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, phew!! that was a close one for Joey wasn't it!!?? Of course, Kaiba didn't help really with his remarks about how long they've been seeing each other...oh well *grumbles about girls stealing her Seto*
person Shina
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it alot and chapter six was hillarious, hope you update soon
person tash922
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally i was wiondering when u would uipdate again i loved it
... i wonder what would happen if duke and honda and every1 saw him as a girl *evil grin* that would be fun

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