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for The Secret

by freewater

person Draza
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! new chappie!! oooohhhh..a twist!!! a secret revealed..why do i sound like a movie announcer? *giggles* great chappie!!!! please write more soon!!
person Kittie
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and I really want to read more. I've been reading this thing since chapter 3....it wouldn't let me review so sorry on that. But it's letting me and stuff. so please more soon.
person Wicabeth
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh, oh, love triangle!

And I hope that Joey gets to punch Duke again *snerk* That'll teach him. And I hope things are going to work out!
person maggiemay
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AND I FORGOT TO REVIEW THE LAST CHAPPIE. *BONKS HEAD ON THE DESK*

Sorry about that. I am really loving this story...even if I don't like het. LOL...keep up the good work.

Maggiemay
person michito
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...poor kaiba! ahl.. i cant wait to see wat happens next.....
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh wow..thats a turn!!!
person Draza
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!! I've been waiting for someone to write about Duke getting punched (or beaten) THANKYOU!!! That bastard had it coming!!
person Wicabeth
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* Guess Duke finally got the hint XD

*whistles* And, damn.. Joey had quite a fun time, didn't she? *grins*
person dramaelf
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read a fic were Jou and Seto got married while drunk and woke up the next morring didn't even know it happened. the athor never finnished the story though. this was a fun chapter I really liked itwhen Jou hit Duke.
person takkycat
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I most certainly didn't mind! Heh...As I said before, I'm not much into het but I think you pulled this off slendidly!!