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for The Secret

by freewater

person Nomalaz
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh man, I loved that at the end! Poor Yugi, so oblivious, and Yami laughing his spiritual butt off!
person dramaelf
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was kind of sad for Tris, and poor Kaiba left all alone.
person PW
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's so sad! Please write more.
person Nomalaz
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a tangled web we weave. How are they gonna clear this one up?
person tash922
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* he loves her ... my god this is betterr then spainsh soap ohreaps
person Kodachi
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am starting to feel a little dizzy... Too many guys eyeing Jou... Honda, Otogi, and Kaiba? Who's next? Bakura? *groans and shakes her head* Forget it. That's too many people already.

That was unexpected, though. Honda in love with Jou... *snorts* it has become an open war now.

Is Yami the only one who knows besides Kaiba and Honda?
person yami990
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is getting more interesting with each chapter. tristian is in love with josephine now that wasn't completely expected but not too surprizing. i wonder how it's going to be between them now. here's cookies pocky and pudding to help you write more.
person vampslyr
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seto and Joey in the boys’ bathroom I can totally see happening. Interesting plot twist with Tristan. Perhaps he thought that he’d be Joey’s only choice for a partner and decided he could afford to wait on making his move. Or maybe he just didn’t want things to get too weird for Joey. Either way as Seto said, they’ve been insulting each other for so long that they do have quit a history together. They also understand each other’s natures quit well which lead to good non-verbal communication. I liked how understanding Seto’s being once he realized what was going on with Tristan. Even if he feels a bit alone at the moment.
person takkycat
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh...I know a fight between two girls over a boy is called a "cat-fight" but what is a fight between two boys over a girl (even if she dresses as a boy) called?? Another excellent chapter!!
person Missa
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, doesn't seem that being a girl is easy... especially in a shonen anime with so many guys. Nyah, this story is always interesting each chapter. Waiting for the next like a good little dog.