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for The Secret

by freewater

person Anon
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
........JOEY IS A GIRL?!!!
person yami990
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please write a sequal.
person SW
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO That last bit was so funny! Although it wouldn't sink in until the last few lines that Yuugi was holding a basbal-bat. I kept thinking it was one of those bats one use for ping pong/table tennis. Which is a whole lot smaller and ...somewhat more innocent? ^^; (My mistake.) In any case, good chapter.
person Draza
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
in the next chappie, is Joey going to come out to the rest of the group? or at least to Yugi? Poor Yugi, completly oblivious to what's going on around him...*giggles* and the fact that Yami was laughing so hard was priceless, *giggles again* you never see that in the anime!!
person yourluckystars2
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! cute..that was such a hilarious chapter. i was laughing pretty hard. can't wait for the next chap.
person Kittie
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pout* This sucks I might lose this story. We're gonna reboot the computer so could you e-mail it to my e-mail or something. Thanks if you can and if you can't that's cool to. Nice chapter though.
person rivgirl
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing* oh man that was funny, lol Joey kissed Kaiba and didn't even see Yugi that was classic, and then chasing Kaiba with a bat oh man just to let you know I was probably laughing just as hard as Yami. Oh man that was a good chapter, please update soon I am going to continue to laugh my ass off here, LOL
person yami990
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh seto's getting chased by a baseball bat welding joey. hehe i can't wait to find out what happens to him. heh i wonder how yugi's going to react when he finds out that joey's really a girl? shock i suppose is most logical but then again this is yugi he isn't exactly typical or logical. leaves plate of pocky for a very funny chapter and to help write faster.
person takkycat
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooo! I would PAY to see Joey chasin' Seto with a bat!! (If I had money that is...) I am laughing out of my seat!! Ouch! That hurt!! Can't wait to see everyone sees just what is, or should I say ISN'T, in Joey's pants...
person Missa
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this is cute. Kaiba gets is way, yay.