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for The Secret

by freewater

schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your work. I have read Innocent Joke as well as A Not So Innocent Joke on top of this story. I have never really liked the whole I am a girl dress as a guy thing. But this time I couldn't stop reading. I found it to be very funny all the way to the end. And I like the way you put the ending on your stories as well. It leaves room so that if you want to do more to the story you could and if you want to leave it were it is you can. It is an ending that works both ways.
person jennifer
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO FRICKIN GOOD. THAT I SERIOUSLY HAVE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE.
SPEACHLESS.*******************************************************
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL that was great!
person Naye025
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
LOVED the fic! So original and good! I wish there was one more sex scene between the two. But overall, I loved the story!!

Ja!
person smalvina
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very sweet story
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sequel....Sequel ^.^
person takkycat
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, and I'm sure she will too!! Great story!! Definately best het I've read!!!
person Chibi Usa
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sequel, sequel, sequel I just love fics where a male character is turned female.
person takkycat
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAwwwww, that was soooo swwweeeeettt! I loved when she entered the room and sat on Seto's desk!!! My only regret is that the story has ended...
person Kittie
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. This is one of the only stories I acctually finished. And the reboot thing would have wiped out everything. But we haven't done it so yeah. I liked it. Have any other stories you think I should read. I like your style so that's why I'm asking.