rate_review Reviews

I really loved all three stories in this little series.

Buuuut i think you should do another. I think the Bakura/Yami stuff needs clearing up, like does Yami really remember sleeping with Baku in eygpt etc. And the whole Yami being in love with Ryou thing needs clearing up to i think. We all know Yugi would find out eventually but im interested in what you would write his reaction like. And maybe Bakura needs to find somebody else because he was 'rejected'.
I did like that Yami didnt love him back btw. Sounds mean but, you kept it realistic y'know. I love that pairing but i think it was better that way.
Poor Bakura ;-;

Anyways! I really loved it. I hope you write some more soon ^^

mmmnnnnn...*small, seemingly futile whimpers*...is that truly it?...Yami (Bakura) doesn't get a happy ending?...;-;...boo.

But it was a good story, nonetheless...when I heard Pharoah was in love with someone else, I just ~knew~ it had to be Ryou...poor Yami!...BWAHAHHHAAHAA!!!!!...

Interesting! Short but who cares? Good job

Very good...surprising about Yami admitting that he liked Ryou...that made my eyes go wide a little bit...laughs...still you have a flare for making Ryou and Bakura interact really well...keep it up....catti

nothing else? gahhhhh *collapses*

I've just finished reading this series. I like the way you're building the characters and I so want Yami and Bakura to be happy....as well as yugi and Ryou. It seems neither hikari would be able to relax into their relationship until the other half of thier souls, their yami's, are happy too. So I hope there is more to come of this. Thanks for sharing your work so far. :)