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for Desideratum

by Ykarzel

person Jessica
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good! I love a vulnerable Seto!
person Raine
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww! more please
person silverfox
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a really great chapter and it seems that this is becoming a really great fic
person MistressCyberia
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful so far! I love how natural and believable you make the interaction between Joey and Seto seem, and the whole part about The Giving Tree was so perfect....it nearly made me cry *sniff*

You're doing a great job and I can't wait to read more!
person Jessica
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This sounds really great so far! I really enjoy the older Joey and Seto characters better because you can really stretch the character to a reasonable means! And what's great about this story is that it seems Joey is the one in complete control (just like in some of your former stories) and Seto is the one completely flustered! Keep up the great writing! Love your style!
person Vapidbreath
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always love your stories. It is so far flowing very well and it is a very original plot. If you are able to, please e-mail me when you update. Thank you.
person Maggiemay
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I am so glad you posted this here. I loved it at the Lair and I am going to LOVE reading it again...and again...and again...ahem...sorry. A bit of an iteration. LOL HUGS

Maggiemay