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for Desideratum

by Ykarzel

person Terry
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!! That was a great ficlet part. That was a really quick update, i hope this becomes a pattern...if not all updates are great!
person J.S.
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooo
wots joey thinking letting seto go?
update soon
please
person Gothic_Kaiba
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries uncontrollably.* Oh, gawd please!!! Write more. I'm was so inthralled with the first chapter, I kept begging to myself that it would continue forever! *glomps you* Need more!!!!
person XaloneXalwaysX
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG WTF n00b!!!! *Spaz* I'm confused ;__; ....I don't understand......Joey thinks he messed up...because he wanted to have sex with Kaiba but not JUST because it was part of therapy?? He's in love with Kaiba yes? And Kaiba's in love with Joey....RIGHT!!!!???? Update again soon please ^_^ <3
person Kugatsu
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! no no no! THEY LOVE EACH OTHER! *tears up* soo cruel
person Lennith
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*smashesheadintodesk* aaaaaaaaaaaah, I LOVE this fic! Very original use of characters and the development of their relationship is rivoting! Keep up the splendid work, maestro!
person ...
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* that was so.....*sniff*......so.....*Bawl*......saaaaaad!!!!!!!!........and yet it is so damned wonderful! *sniffs as she slowly recovers herself*.......i love that story...... it's not done, right?.......i just......it just......they just.......I LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!!!......... ^^ it's such a wonderful idea......and i haven't read a yaoi when seto and joey are 'all grown up', so that was a pleasant surprise........and i just absoluteley overall loooooove this story.......i can't even really think about what to write in this review......so sorry if it seems as if im repeating myself a whole lot-i just get so flustered/exited/emotional/whatever-you-want-to-call-it, that i can't really think/write strait for a while^^ (go ahead and laugh at me if you want ^^)..........*smiles through tears*........that was really awesome!......i liked it when seto pulled joey into his lap at the dinner thingy.....and i also like how joey dropped the glass when set (sorry-i just can't help calling him 'set' right now, i've read so many fics with him in it-i feel as if he's my friend *wink*) when set mentions that he ha a date- it was so sweet!.......i just really hope that mayhap joey can get help about his problem with his 'morals'.......he just needs to do seto and not worry about ethnics! (of course if he did that at first the story wouldn't really have anywhere to go to- sly thinking ^.~)........ah well!......great lemon at the end! and keep up the great work!
-ttfn-
person XaloneXalwaysX
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my effing GAWD! You're right...I hate you now. I detest you with such a passion!!! >:E What just happened...poor Kaiba...stupid Joey! That IDIOT! I'll kill him! I'll kill YOU!!! Rawr!!!
~Ahem~ However, I fooking love you! *snuggle* this last chapter was so...holy crap WOW! Hehehe ^_^U thank you for updating. Now get crackin' on the next chapter! Or I'll diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiie! *Blink*
person Silvershadowfire
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One thing I don't get - why is Joey feeling guilty? Evidently he's done this before, with other patients. Is it because he wants to this time, or because Seto took control?

Great chapter, and I'll be looking for the next update!
person fiby
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how could you end it like that yuou evil meeney head! please update soon!