rate_review Reviews

I read it all over again and I still like it lots ^-^

I could still squeal at the words "it just slipped" because it means so much more than what it says superficially. Whenever i read that line I start thinking about Joey who notices that something really slipped out of his hands: his working ethics, his duty, whatever you wanna call it... i so love this line!

Also I love how seto knows perfectly well what he wants and what Jou wants as well, it's just Jou who's in denial.

And of course I love then ending with all the talk about Dr. Aurulent and Joey being two completely different persons and how both Jou and Seto just accept it like it was the most normal thing to do, and only Jason kinda makes fun of it when he points out how Jou extracts himself of the situation by using his identities instead of "I"...

I think that's something i haven't seen before... i like it ^-^

That was an adorable story! It was very smoothly written (tales on adultfanfiction.net that are primarily devoid of basic grammar mistakes are rare) and the plot was refreshingly realistic and human... (I was absolutely elated when I read the cheery ending. ^_^) I love it!

Love it!
lol very funny.

lol, lovely ending. ^_^ overall, a lovely story :thumbs up:

A well thought out theme, tied in nicely and flowed smoothly. Characters held up and followed their proper course with out deviation. Grammar and punctuation done fabulously. An excellent story. I would love to read more like it. Thank you.

LOVE IT! I always have faith in you to have interesting fanfics! And I just can't get over how original it was to have defined words describe each chapter: GENIUS! It was very moving! Are you thinking of something akin to a sequel? I really like the characters you've created out of the two; you used them to their fullest potential, so to speak. You used Seto's loneliness and vulnerability yet cunning wit to justify his 'desire to need' Joey, and you used Joey's innate need to help others drive his 'desire to want' Seto. I also love your OC couple, Jason and Ashton! They are a great outside POV and a breath of fresh air! I liked Joey and Jay's banter in the final chapter; very cute! I think it was a very touching story and definitely my all-time favorite Seto/Joey fic, if not my all-time fave YGO fic! Kudos to you and your writing! I will definitely read it again..and again..and again..and..well, you get the idea...o_o...Ja!

o.O WOW!!! Where you come up with this idea?? This is really neat. Different, for sure but neat! I'm a student in massage so I don't know if legal. This is really cool. Write more soon, please....

OMFGWTFn00b! I go to 'splode!! It's so angsty...it really is. Stupid Kaiba...not knowing wtf to say -_-" ...and Joey! Why don't YOU tell Kaiba what you actually want hmm? Damn hypocrite....>_>.....so anyway! Update soon ^_^U.

...nmnmnmnmnm...*whimper*...I don't think I can take the pressure!...the heartache!...the devastation!...Oh..I can?...well then, I guess I'll see you at the final installment of "Desideratum"!...^_^

i love this story so much! (i nearly yelled out with joy when i saw there was another update ^^).......anyways, does seto even understand what jou is trying to tell him?......does he even understand that jou is telling him that he knows seto likes him and that he likes seto back?.......if he doesn't see that he's incredibly dense, and deserves to be hit over the head with a bag of frozen brussel sprouts (don't ask me where that came from, i don't even know)......anyways....it sounds as if this story is almost over......*tear*.......but it has been incredibly good, and i do truly hope that jou and seto 'get together' by the end......as lovers- not patient and doctor......well, thats all i wanted to say, so thanks.....and until next time....
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