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by Ykarzel

person Xiaolang\'s Ying Fa
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I swear I'll never be able in a story to say "I need you" as an endearment ever again. But...other than that, it was so awesome! Not as good as Sand Lover, as that was the best freaking fic I ever read, but it was still a good, educational, read. I loved the "Do we ned to catch him?" phrase. It had me laughing! ^^ Please continue with the ever so cool fics, Karzel-chan!

Love,
Xiaolang's Ying Fa
person Rayne
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. The adult Kiaba and Jou were wonderful to read. :) as were the emotional wants and needs explained. awesome!! I was glad to read on your author page that shades part 5 is in the works...YEAAAAA I hope to see that soon. I would love to see a Yugi/seto/yami pairing in it...grins..anyway keep writing we are always glad to see it.. :)
person ...
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really really good!......only......i can't beleive it's over already!!!! :(........i kinda wanted to know how their dinner went, and i wanted to kow what they did (to eachother) after the dinner was over..........oh well!.......i guess i will just have to imagine it.......although, a follow up :would: be nice..........anyhoo! great story, and im going to keep it in my favorites folder, just so i can go and read it whensoever i choose to ^^.......buh bye!!
-ttfn-
person graham
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO GOOD...wow your smart. intelligent use of chapter titles. YOUR STILL MY HERO!!!
love, your stalker
-yaoi_escence from LJ
person Khielira
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! LOVE IT!! Joey and Seto made it work! *giggles*
person zombiedarkelf18
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah i'm so glad there togther
congrats on a great fic
does a dance :)
person Nite Nite *not logged in*
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done with this, quite a unqiue fic, the first I've read of its kind. *Chuckles* I thought it was cute how Joey and Seto played games with each other.

Seto: Well of course I played them better then Joey.

Joey: You did not!

Seto: I got you in the end didn't I?

Joey: Umm...err....only because I allowed it! ><

Seto: *Grins and tackles Joey to the floor*

Joey: SETO WHA...hey...do that again.

NN: O.O *Blushes* Umm...anyway, I enjoyed reading this, your a very talented writer and once again wonderful job with this.
person setosgirl (not signed in)
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That was really quite awesome. let me be mushy and say that I'm glad it worked out. ^^ Even the fact of it being set after the series (anything AU like that usually turns me right off) was nice. Not my all time favorite couple, but if I keep reading things like this, it'll get there.
person Gothic_Kaiba
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! You can't stop yet! You must put up an epilogue! Oo; Something? Please? Okay, maybe I should use the word 'want.' No, I don't 'need' the fic, but I do want it! XD Sorry, couldn't resist that part. *hugs* It was such a great ficcy. I hate to see it end. T_T
person Kugatsu
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It ended a little...un dramatic. I was like Jason, I wanted somethin to happen.

BUt i liked it. Very cool.