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Great chapter! I read your story yesterday and I loved it! I was so happy when I discovered that you posted a new chapter! Please continue soon! And kick Anzus ass! ;O)

RD: hey Schwarzwald im sending another review to make up for my lame on earlier cuz im not quite sure if i got what u mean by email you or use paragraphs or w/e but nyways to get to my point that was a totally lame way to enjoy my new torture session cuz quite frankly ive had it with yami this makes it three times now THREE TIMES he fucked yugi up and he has even touched the boy first theres duelist kingdom were he risks killing kaiba and though i can understand his motives he should have known better then to think that he could just do something like that without first telling yugi why im sure then yugi would have been more lenient but did yami ask him no did he even bother to tell yugi about what he was thinking no and then there was the second time yugi told him not to play the seal of orichalcos and what does he do he plays it and wanted his monsters to forgive him HAH what a laugh last time i checked they were yugis monsters to begin with and yami expect them to forgive him for doing that to there master sry tough guy but not this time nor the final time again you betrayed yugis trust three times yami well as they say in baseball three strikes your out loser honestly you want to make yami pay give him a taste of his own medicine ppl love yami cuz hes good looking but beauty is only skin deep you know u want him to suffer simple get recordings of his phonecalls and get the complaints of the parents and families of these lovers of yamis whom he just used and abused list all the suicides that police had to report that oughta bring him down a few pegs and as for the others lets see how they like being cursed shall we doom them to be consumed with nightmares of guilt as the old saying goes oh what tangled web we weave and we aim to deceave they broke yugis trust they lied to him they dont care about him its all lies well let the guilt destroy them lets see how they like being the worms they really are and finally last but not least is anzu and her gang of wannabe school prostitutes give her adress phone number and ny personal info over to as many sex offenders as you can find Schwarz im sure they would love a plump juicy piece of meat like her let her life turn to hell show her what happens when u decide to become a fillthy slutty class A bitch and teach her my most favorite of sayings as well as the rest of them "what goes around comes around dearies" you can escape fromt the law you can escape from your own guilt for a while but theres one thing you cant escape KARMA you worms lovely karma she will kick your fucked up asses all the way to the hell whole you crawled out of and make you think twice before messing with yugi again show them Schwarz show them to be the washed up no bodies they really are anzu wants to be a slut show her what happens to sluts yami wants to be glamorous well lets show ppl what hes really like behind that handsome facade and the rest of them think there so great cuz they dumped the shrimp for a cop out washed up wannabe pharaoh wait strike the shirmp part make that a king thats right pharaoh in my eyes your no king you stoped being the king of games they day you thought u could get away with playing yugi like that sry you crossed the line you all did and now your going to pay so pls Schwarz take my suggestions if u want cuz i personally want them to pay *tosses yami and the others into the tortures she just suggested and listens to the endless screaming*well gtg now Schwarz pls keep up the great work and update soon im eager to dish out more punishment and more humiliation im far from done for every tear that boy shed for every scrape scratch scar bruise and mar he got on his beautiful soul and body they will recieve it a hundred times more greater JA NE ^_______^ btw Schwarz if u need i guess more warning let me know put my email up if u need to just let me know if that what u were talking about with the whole email or make paragraphs stuff well again gtg now JA NE ^__^ and consider this my real review not my other one k

what can i say? yugi, i know this hurts and two wrongs don't make a right but shit they deserve to be shunned. and i'm sorry ryou, but if i were you i would keep kicking bakura in hte damn balls until he puked htem up, then i'd beat his pea-sized brain out with a baseball bat. anzu, can i please run her over with a steam roller?? plz plz plz!!!!! as for yami... part of my wants to tear off his reason for being a man but another part whatns to scar his face so everytime he looks at a mirror it'll break, but hten i jsut want to smack him around until he comes to his senses.

i love this fic i really do!! yugi is pissed and yes it's cliche to have yugi geting hte abuse but shit he's pissed as hell and the others are taking what they deserve. anyway, i hope u update soon ^^

RD: ok pharaoh ive been nice you seemed to redeem yourself after your duel with darts but this has gone on LONG ENOUGH (FYI peeps and author if by any means what so ever u dont or cant stomach graphic violence i suggest you skip it k its not for the faint of heart ty) * grabs yami marik bakura ryou joey tristan tea and all the girls who hurt yugi then straps them to the walls turns them over to there backs then whipes them with her diamond coated whips and she dosnt stop she keeps whipping them until they have 10,000 lashings then she turns them around and walks up to each every one of them and pumps them full of lead till there heads are fit to burst then she grabs barrels of scarabs and sends the swarm of scarabs and a barrel of killer bees to utterly destroy them then she brings them back pain and scars still there then she grabs her scimitars and starts cutting them open keeping them fully consious of their pain then rips out each piece of meat on there bodies then rips out there bones then grabs there skulls breaks them open grabs there brains and smears them all over them then grabs there hearts and takes out a red lightsaber and cuts them all into tiny pieces still keeping them alive and fully consious she restores there bodies again pain and scars still intact then she attaches masks atached to tubes to their faces and then consumes there bodies with toxins poisons acids and miasma till there bodies melt from the inside out then restores them again again pain and scars still there then finally she tortures there minds has anzu raped a thousand times over (not really but her memories claim so this is all in her head) then she gets laughed at school cuz she such a sissy brain dead twit she stumbles into everything shes fugly and shes the most disgusting slut on the face of this earth jou and honda always torture her ushio consantly takes her to have some "alone time" and yugi just watches and laughs while yami is in his arms him also laughing at her till she cracks then repeats the same thing with other girls each more painful then the last until they all crack then she moves on to yami and makes his the worst by far hes forced to watch his hikari get made love to by Marik and Bakura watch as his 'precious hikari turns from him and looks at him with nothing but hate in his eyes he destroys atemus rep leaving him a disgusting degraded joke all girls hate him all boys beat him up and all his histroy is told in jokes and his life is literally hell till he also cracks and starts breaking down asking his hikari for forgivness she slaps him in the face then says* its what you deserve you pig and i wont stop there all of you will know pain and he will come out on top like no other mark my words you son of a god dam pussy of a bitch and dirty filthy disease infested sluts i will make you all PAY every scar every scrap of pain u put on yugi ill give back to you at a THOUSAND times more intense then ever i WILL NOT SEE THAT BOY HURT GOT IT *grabs all of them by the hair then straps them to mind washing machines that destroys there confidence breaks their wills and eventually will show on the outside and at the same time all they see is the one who could have saved them all had they not been so mean* hmm well Author good story though i cant say im to overly fond of yugi getting hurt like this huh but w/e its ur story dear im not gonna jump down your throat about it at leat yami and the bitches from hell are another story TRUST ME but none the less good work and keep up the great work and dont worry bout all that torture i vowed yrs ago to never put the author in them cuz its not them im mad at its who im SUPPOSE to be mad at that im well hehe mad at hehe now ill repeat myself one last time dont take this to heart author this has nothing to do with you its just yami and the bitches im mad at and remember if by any means this is too graphic pls skip it hehe no need to lose your lunch/breakfast/dinner over this gtg now JA NE ^__^

RD: oh btw ryou mailk marik bakura and solomon and Marik i left you boys outa "fun" didnt i *grabs them tosses them into her automatic torture chamber that auto matically restores and keeps them consious and alive while the pain and scars are still there till time runs out and she sets the time for two weeks of solid physical mental and emotional torture and puts in her desired torture session with included all sorts of physical tortue insects and toxins included nasty lil necro curses the poisoned there minds to no end along with some other tortures to make em cry there head out then finally turn there hearst into unrecognizable scraps of meat that even the otopsy couldnt decipher what happend to there hearts then leaves the room to do its job* there no one left out and my list will keep growing guys so go ahead keep screwing up ill be waiting so please author send more my way ive still got plenty more ideas up my sleeve and pls do update soon like i said earlier gtg now JA NE ^__^

YUGI!!! *huggles him, slaps Anzu REALLY hard, kills her, cuddles Yugi a bit more, burns ALL the copies, sends Yami back to the showdow realm, brings him back, Yugi forgives him, Yami and Yugi make out? *
well something like that anyway can you please continue???? PRETTY PLEASE!!!

kick bakura's ass, kick everyone's asses please >_<

thanks sometimes i get so caught up. ooh look another asshole to feel mywrath! *big stupid grin on face asi smash grandpa's face in wiht a baseball bat and tries to shove motocycle up yami marik's ass* now he should be more kind i ishizu. if i were her i'd cut off his dick and balls and make him eat them with garlic spagetti ^^ *yes i'm still pissed at everyone* ooh i needed that nap. i hope you type a solution up fast. oh and for atemu, well like to see him get any more endorsment when all his fingers are smash, his body a living network of stichers like my fav villianess in a old comic and stripped bald. and i'll do it jsut say the word and i'll hurt him for asking like such a poppuse peacock *grins happily while weilding a bloodied bat*

*is crying but grabed giant hunting spear with twin blades and a silver gragon carved into the blade* i'll kill them... i'll kill them all where it hruts the most!! even ryou will suffer for his insolance!! *images of cutting all teh guys' d*ck flashes in mind as well as stabbing them repeatedly and melting their items in a volcano* and anzu and her bithces... i'll skin them alive!! *goes hunting*

whew i jsut had to get them off my chest. this story is so, damn!! i actually do feel like crying though. i really hope you update soon!!

There is so much missing this, but I will continue to read.