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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: hey its quite alright Shwarz i get ya its not meant to be nasty funny just comedy central funny and now i get ya also bout my reviews ya i can get carried away with my typing now lets see its just dropped to anzu and yami now though solomon could use some minor punishments now lets see i know ill let my muses have a go its been awhile Cazic Thule God of Fear father to the Shissar and iksar ppl show that bitch anzu what fear is all about
CT:as u wish Red Dragon * summons anzu to him who screams at the sight of a faceless worm* thats right mortal know fear despair anxiety and darkness it will only increase my pleasure all the more *chains her to the walls the invokes curses more sinister then Shissar ppl or Venril Sathir slowly draining her very soul and essence then forces her to spew nothing but the truth world wide *satisfactory Red Dragon
RD: oh most definitly now solomon youve improved some what but im still severely disapointed in you you didnt come to help yugi did you no you came only to help yami to get yugi to stop yelling at him yet it dosnt seem to botther you that yami broke his hikaris trust in him AGAIN so ill leave you in the capable hands of Lanys Tvyl
LT: rdy old man im going to send you into a world of hurt * claws all his hair out then gives him nightmares day in and out about how his grandson grew to hate him and the world how he brought back the shadow games and revived his past were his BEWD was ripped up but switched kaiba with yugi who keeps screaming at him that its his fault cuz he wouldnt love his true family the way he should*
RD: good now me and Innoruuk are going to deal with you personally Yami cuz quite frankly im sick and tired of watching that poor boy put life and limb out for you only to get hurt again and again cuz of your stupidity were heres a taste of karma comming your way yami rdy innoruuk
I:most definitly *chains yami to his torture chamber and makes him physically ill to the point of reach death for weeks on end
RD; well gtg now ill finish later Shwarz sry rainstorm going on right now later DONT FOR GET TO UPDATE AND KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK oh and ill finish my torture session when im able to JA NE ^__^
CT:as u wish Red Dragon * summons anzu to him who screams at the sight of a faceless worm* thats right mortal know fear despair anxiety and darkness it will only increase my pleasure all the more *chains her to the walls the invokes curses more sinister then Shissar ppl or Venril Sathir slowly draining her very soul and essence then forces her to spew nothing but the truth world wide *satisfactory Red Dragon
RD: oh most definitly now solomon youve improved some what but im still severely disapointed in you you didnt come to help yugi did you no you came only to help yami to get yugi to stop yelling at him yet it dosnt seem to botther you that yami broke his hikaris trust in him AGAIN so ill leave you in the capable hands of Lanys Tvyl
LT: rdy old man im going to send you into a world of hurt * claws all his hair out then gives him nightmares day in and out about how his grandson grew to hate him and the world how he brought back the shadow games and revived his past were his BEWD was ripped up but switched kaiba with yugi who keeps screaming at him that its his fault cuz he wouldnt love his true family the way he should*
RD: good now me and Innoruuk are going to deal with you personally Yami cuz quite frankly im sick and tired of watching that poor boy put life and limb out for you only to get hurt again and again cuz of your stupidity were heres a taste of karma comming your way yami rdy innoruuk
I:most definitly *chains yami to his torture chamber and makes him physically ill to the point of reach death for weeks on end
RD; well gtg now ill finish later Shwarz sry rainstorm going on right now later DONT FOR GET TO UPDATE AND KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK oh and ill finish my torture session when im able to JA NE ^__^
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TOO RIGHT WE HATE HER SHE MUST DIE!!! VERY VERY PAINFULLY MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Someone run off with the rest of your clothes?"
Heh, that made me laugh, definitely a new one. Damn, go Yugi, he's just smacking people all over the place lately. I wonder where Marik's taking him now... Should be quite interesting indeed. Yugi's day sounded great too, something I'd love to do, just to unwind. Feeling completely free and just taking care of yourself is one of the best feelings. ^.^
Can't wait for the next update!
Heh, that made me laugh, definitely a new one. Damn, go Yugi, he's just smacking people all over the place lately. I wonder where Marik's taking him now... Should be quite interesting indeed. Yugi's day sounded great too, something I'd love to do, just to unwind. Feeling completely free and just taking care of yourself is one of the best feelings. ^.^
Can't wait for the next update!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YO THERE. Finally a Yugi Marik fic that KICKS ASS, seriously yours is the only decent fic out there with this pairing, anyone else who writes this pairing either maks Yugi a badass like Marik style or Marik goes soppy which ain't gonna happen! I mean geeez how thick can people get. Anzu is the b!tch from hell, Yami is a twisted know-it-all bastard and the rest of 'em suck, part from Marik, Malik, 'Kura...and i have to admit i have a soft spot for Ryou. Seriously though congrats on writing a great fic! x
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEBODY MADE FIC THAT I LIKE!!! a marikxyugi, angstines, a fucking idiot yami (sometimes i just hate him, cause people always seem to only notice HIM not yugi *hugs yugi blushie* ) and in the future, some anzu bashing!!!! (im still wationg for a fic, where yami gets anzu bregnant, and they live a shitty life with a whining baby, while yugis havin "fun" with some body else ^__^ eather marik or seto!!! XD )
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, knew it. Oh well, I cannot gut this pairing (me being the hardcore YamiYugi fan) so i'll come back when it's all done just to read what happened to Anzu.
*Waves* Ja neeee, good continuation with this ^______________^
*Waves* Ja neeee, good continuation with this ^______________^
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm absolutely loving this so far! please tell me that this will be a marikXyugi pairing. if you do, i would totally love you for life. that is one of my favorite odd pairings and it is so hard to find fics about it. i mean, can nobody see the greatness that is marik and yugi? *sighs and shakes head* on with the review, umm... i like yugi's way of handling things so far but does he ever plan forgiving his friends or are they just S.O.L? personally, i'd do the latter. anyway, nice work so far. i am definitely interested in seeing how this plays out. (hopefully, with the end result being: marik and yugi banging each other out while plotting anzu's demise. ^__^) so until next time, ja!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, he lied for Marik. Heh, I really like the way you write Marik, snappy, but not an all-out asshole, and the chain thing was nice. Also, I like the twist to Yugi's character, not just rolling over for everyone. Man, that cop was pushy though. Heh, I must admit, a while ago I was considering writing a Yugi/Marik thing, since it seems like such a random pairing to me, but your story seems to be working it out well, so good job! I look forward to the next update! ^.^
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, You said "A" yami was going to help him... would that be going toward Marikx Yugi? ^^;;;;;
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: well i have the tendency to get highly graphic and violent when someone harms my yugi huh its sickening how much that boy is going through i mean really, come on jou honda you betrayed his trust you should have know anzu was going to do something like this with the fact shes so gaga over that prissy little wash out grr just thinking about it makes me soo mad i could scream
*her dark sinister powers erupt forth and drag yami anzu and solomon and bakura into her chamber then she straps them down ignoring there pleas to be released she goes up to yami first then slaps him in the face hard thus silencing his pathetic whinning*
RD: you make me sick yami how could you to your own hikari does he mean nothing to you now my god and u want him to forgive you for what were does he begin if it wasnt for him you wouldnt even have a body right now and as soon as you get it what do u do turn your back on him steal his very life AND humilate him by invading his privacy its called PRIVATE FOR A REASON YOU GOD DAM SON OF A WHORE
*shes uses her powers and strips him of his masks and disguises showing the world in live cameras world wide what joke he is a total wash out good for nothing but failing then she turns to Solomon*
RD:well well if it isnt the olf senile fart of a geezer how does it feel gramps, knowing that deep within your very soul your destroying your real grandson. Yami is a fake and imposter hes not real he could never be your real grandson last time i checked he was NOT BORN AS A MOTOU NOR WILL EVER BE SO, i wonder how the world let alone the hospitals would ever react if they knew he has no past no family no nothing his own blood isnt even related to you hes a lie thats it just a disgusting lie and so are you mr. oh so great game master PAH ya right i wish you had died in that stupid tomb you dont deserve to be a grandfather after how badly youve hurt him you and yami bothe are not yugis family nor could you ever be
*use her magic and strips him of all his memories of ever being a good grandfather till he is smothered in guilt and leaves him in that guilt then turns to Anzu aka the bitch from hell*
RD:so anzu down to you now the most disgusting horrible pig ass slut ive ever had the dishonor of knowing your a disgrace a filthy disgrace you were yugis friend since the day he first met you and this is how you show him that just because some stupd ghost makes his appearance u want nothing more to do with yugi what the matter slut no more friendship speeches i guess ppl got tired of listening to your whinning bullshit you go on and on and on about friendship but when something better comes your way you start going on and on about it sheesh your worse then any bitch and or slut ever you hog everything that apeals to you friendship yami and popularity whats next slut money power were is it going to end u slut you care only about getting more like the stupid fucking slut queen you are well i hope you wrot infact ill do that for you
*launches hundreds of sinister spells killing slowly and painfully till she cracks then slowly decays into nothing then she moves onto to the last person the son of a fucking bitch bakura*
RD:well well bakura got kicked out of ur home tough shit yugi got kicked outa his life you moron and its all your fault he could have dealth with his yami being a fucking life stealing slut and hell if u hate yami so much take it out with him jeez ppl you all just treat him like hes nothing and u expect him to forgive you or show sympathy tough fucking shit you bastards all of you yes including the so called girls so he gives what u want and u say thanks for nothing shirmp then toss him out huh he gives you a life yami and thats all u want then u treat him lilke a fucking baby anzu the slut u get the man of your dreams and destroy yugis life i hope you get aids you slut solomon i guess when an older grandon came along you didnt need yugi any more huh well FUCK YOU OLD MAN I HOPE YOU DIE OF FUCKING CANCER and finally bakura you filthy scumbag so you hate yami cuz his daddy unknowingly took out your citties residents then TAKE IT OUT ON YAMI AND HIS FATHER DIPSHIT leave yugi outa this jeeze you all got what you fucking want now leave him be you shit faces huh well author keep up the great work and pls let me get angry again im looking forward to our next meeting gtg now JA NE ^__^
*her dark sinister powers erupt forth and drag yami anzu and solomon and bakura into her chamber then she straps them down ignoring there pleas to be released she goes up to yami first then slaps him in the face hard thus silencing his pathetic whinning*
RD: you make me sick yami how could you to your own hikari does he mean nothing to you now my god and u want him to forgive you for what were does he begin if it wasnt for him you wouldnt even have a body right now and as soon as you get it what do u do turn your back on him steal his very life AND humilate him by invading his privacy its called PRIVATE FOR A REASON YOU GOD DAM SON OF A WHORE
*shes uses her powers and strips him of his masks and disguises showing the world in live cameras world wide what joke he is a total wash out good for nothing but failing then she turns to Solomon*
RD:well well if it isnt the olf senile fart of a geezer how does it feel gramps, knowing that deep within your very soul your destroying your real grandson. Yami is a fake and imposter hes not real he could never be your real grandson last time i checked he was NOT BORN AS A MOTOU NOR WILL EVER BE SO, i wonder how the world let alone the hospitals would ever react if they knew he has no past no family no nothing his own blood isnt even related to you hes a lie thats it just a disgusting lie and so are you mr. oh so great game master PAH ya right i wish you had died in that stupid tomb you dont deserve to be a grandfather after how badly youve hurt him you and yami bothe are not yugis family nor could you ever be
*use her magic and strips him of all his memories of ever being a good grandfather till he is smothered in guilt and leaves him in that guilt then turns to Anzu aka the bitch from hell*
RD:so anzu down to you now the most disgusting horrible pig ass slut ive ever had the dishonor of knowing your a disgrace a filthy disgrace you were yugis friend since the day he first met you and this is how you show him that just because some stupd ghost makes his appearance u want nothing more to do with yugi what the matter slut no more friendship speeches i guess ppl got tired of listening to your whinning bullshit you go on and on and on about friendship but when something better comes your way you start going on and on about it sheesh your worse then any bitch and or slut ever you hog everything that apeals to you friendship yami and popularity whats next slut money power were is it going to end u slut you care only about getting more like the stupid fucking slut queen you are well i hope you wrot infact ill do that for you
*launches hundreds of sinister spells killing slowly and painfully till she cracks then slowly decays into nothing then she moves onto to the last person the son of a fucking bitch bakura*
RD:well well bakura got kicked out of ur home tough shit yugi got kicked outa his life you moron and its all your fault he could have dealth with his yami being a fucking life stealing slut and hell if u hate yami so much take it out with him jeez ppl you all just treat him like hes nothing and u expect him to forgive you or show sympathy tough fucking shit you bastards all of you yes including the so called girls so he gives what u want and u say thanks for nothing shirmp then toss him out huh he gives you a life yami and thats all u want then u treat him lilke a fucking baby anzu the slut u get the man of your dreams and destroy yugis life i hope you get aids you slut solomon i guess when an older grandon came along you didnt need yugi any more huh well FUCK YOU OLD MAN I HOPE YOU DIE OF FUCKING CANCER and finally bakura you filthy scumbag so you hate yami cuz his daddy unknowingly took out your citties residents then TAKE IT OUT ON YAMI AND HIS FATHER DIPSHIT leave yugi outa this jeeze you all got what you fucking want now leave him be you shit faces huh well author keep up the great work and pls let me get angry again im looking forward to our next meeting gtg now JA NE ^__^