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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! hey bud thanks! continue... (thanks for the email by the way!) lovin it- MIL
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn I seem to have missed loads of chappies since my last review..I really don't get on this site enough. This story still rocks and LOVE LOVE LOVE marik. Normally I have to admit that although I'm a big fan of this pairing I'm not that keen on Marik. This fic has like totally changed my mind!!! wonderful update soon
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off let me just say THIS IS ONE BAD-ASS FIC! It was just horrible what they did to Yugi.(the basterds) Payback is a bitch, and i'm lovin it! I have never really taken into account this sort of pairing but you completely changed my mind. Keep doin what ya doin because you have some major skills, and of course i'll be back when you update.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a good fic, but you should nip the ooc-ness in the bud. I can understand Yugi being pissed off and acting differently for a time, but I doubt he would do a permanent 180 in personality. Even when he didn't have friends, Yugi was nice and sweet, so I don't think he'd change so drastically.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU MUST CONTINUE!!! YUGI KILL ANZU!!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the Yugi with a backbone
Greets
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapters! Continue soon! I like your Yugi! Let him stay that way! ^^ *waiting impatiently for the next chapters*
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, anonymous is for cowards, especially if they're flaming. Mur.
Heh, fuckin' great, Yugi's got a darker side of his own, even without Yami. The teacher incident was really funny and whoa, Ryou's acting like a 12-year-old girl dumped by her first crush. Wonder if he had a thing for Yugi or if he's just like that. Ooh, the prinicpal, will Yugi keep his new-found freedom, or apologize and go back to the way he was...? I like that he can trade word with both Marik and Bakura without blinking an eye, not many can.
I love you forever for updating this fast! ^.^
Heh, fuckin' great, Yugi's got a darker side of his own, even without Yami. The teacher incident was really funny and whoa, Ryou's acting like a 12-year-old girl dumped by her first crush. Wonder if he had a thing for Yugi or if he's just like that. Ooh, the prinicpal, will Yugi keep his new-found freedom, or apologize and go back to the way he was...? I like that he can trade word with both Marik and Bakura without blinking an eye, not many can.
I love you forever for updating this fast! ^.^
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And don't worry about OOC-ness, it doesn't seem over the top to me, and really, you have creative license. Then again, I might just not know what I'm talking about since I've never actually watched the series, and I've only read a few chapters of the manga. It makes good fan fiction and I like it for doing so, but it's a stupid series in my opinion.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. I leave a review, check the archive a few hours later, and HOLY HELL there's TWO new chapters! ...have I mentioned I love you?
Sand nigger, huh? That's one I haven't heard before (and I've heard a lot of weird names). I do like the angle of Jou and Honda being racist. And HA, I thought Ryou had a thing for Yugi. I feel bad for both him and Bakura though, bummer. Really hot blow job though, I definitely look forward to any smut happening in the future. As before, Yugi trading insults with Marik is always great to read, and I like how you've adjusted his personality. Creativity an' all that. Personally as long as a story's good, I'll adjust to any character being the enemy, being made fun of, or doing things most people say they wouldn't do in the series. As long as it's good writing, and you can make me believe it. You have here, good writing, and I can't wait for more! ^.^
Also, what does daijoubu mean? You might think I'd have picked up on it after this many fics, but I haven't.
Sand nigger, huh? That's one I haven't heard before (and I've heard a lot of weird names). I do like the angle of Jou and Honda being racist. And HA, I thought Ryou had a thing for Yugi. I feel bad for both him and Bakura though, bummer. Really hot blow job though, I definitely look forward to any smut happening in the future. As before, Yugi trading insults with Marik is always great to read, and I like how you've adjusted his personality. Creativity an' all that. Personally as long as a story's good, I'll adjust to any character being the enemy, being made fun of, or doing things most people say they wouldn't do in the series. As long as it's good writing, and you can make me believe it. You have here, good writing, and I can't wait for more! ^.^
Also, what does daijoubu mean? You might think I'd have picked up on it after this many fics, but I haven't.