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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hohoho!!!
I'm loving this dark Yugi! Not that I'm surprised by it... as much of a "goodie-too-shoes" he may have been...he still had his quirks. (Full out asking Jou to borrow porn and all that). That's the side of Yugi I enjoy! XD
Still, as much as I'd like to see Yami in the hot-seat... I do crave a bit of closure, so I'll be eagerly anticipating the next chapter to see how it goes! I'm thinking things will definitely turn out for the best!
Keep up the most awesome work! Definitely got a new fan in me, despite the lack of Jou here... and that says alot! Till next chapter!
I'm loving this dark Yugi! Not that I'm surprised by it... as much of a "goodie-too-shoes" he may have been...he still had his quirks. (Full out asking Jou to borrow porn and all that). That's the side of Yugi I enjoy! XD
Still, as much as I'd like to see Yami in the hot-seat... I do crave a bit of closure, so I'll be eagerly anticipating the next chapter to see how it goes! I'm thinking things will definitely turn out for the best!
Keep up the most awesome work! Definitely got a new fan in me, despite the lack of Jou here... and that says alot! Till next chapter!
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: hehe oh come on yugi surely you can think of something more twisted then that hell even i can do better watch and learn young grasshopper in the ways of torture now first things first we need a victem ill get anzu u get yami ok yugi
Y:k*grabs his yami* now what
RD: now we torture them first you chain them to the walls so they dont get the foolish notion to try and escape *chains anzu to the wall* now dont gag them its more fun to hear them scream and plus no one would ever think to look for them here so its safe
Y: ok *chains yami to the wall* so what do we do next
RD: choose your wepon of choice number one the benefit of being magical is i can keep them alive for years giving us all the fun we could ask for now watch carefully *grabs her two diamond coated solid steal whips and starts lashin all up anzus chest then turns her around and reapeats the process with her back side * now you try yugi here *gives him a whip forged of light*that should give yami quite the sting
Y:*takes the whip of light and lashes yamis front then also turns him around lashes his back* hey this is fun
RD:yup i know now onto the next one now personally i like to add in a lil supernatural just to shake things up a bit watch and learn* grabs her necromancy book and slowly and painfully infect anzu with the worst of curses diseases and poisons till her mind cracks from the pain and still she continues then she grabs a special crystal that turns allt he pain into excrusiating pleasure for yami so hes enjoying himself as well as yugi while shes in absolute agony the greater the pleasure for the boys the greater the pain for her then she places her hand on anzus ruined mind then brings it back then shuts it down then uses her magic to turn anzu intoa mindless soulless puppet under her complete control but fully aware of the humilation shes going through even though she can do nothing to stop it and forces her to get down on every single last guy on earth and to become the human toy for guys world wide* there now her body is slowly being killed by the very thing shes loves to do slut around now its yur turn yugi
Y: ok *summons up the powers of the shadow realm and inflicts dmg upon dmg at yami then infects his mind with visions of submision forcing him to believe he has to submit till finally he does and is under yugis complete control then he creates a love potion so pumped with lust that yami would start creaming his pants just to have yugi look at him and makes him drink the potion till hes naught but a slave to yugis whims through the entire day you could hear sounds of absolute pleasure as yugi spends some time with his new toy* thanks red dragon now i get ya
RD: not a problem yugi just have fun and speaking of fun great new chappies for this ficcy Shwarz i hope you update soon and sry for the cut off of my last review but unfortunately i had a storm come in that night well keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^
Y:k*grabs his yami* now what
RD: now we torture them first you chain them to the walls so they dont get the foolish notion to try and escape *chains anzu to the wall* now dont gag them its more fun to hear them scream and plus no one would ever think to look for them here so its safe
Y: ok *chains yami to the wall* so what do we do next
RD: choose your wepon of choice number one the benefit of being magical is i can keep them alive for years giving us all the fun we could ask for now watch carefully *grabs her two diamond coated solid steal whips and starts lashin all up anzus chest then turns her around and reapeats the process with her back side * now you try yugi here *gives him a whip forged of light*that should give yami quite the sting
Y:*takes the whip of light and lashes yamis front then also turns him around lashes his back* hey this is fun
RD:yup i know now onto the next one now personally i like to add in a lil supernatural just to shake things up a bit watch and learn* grabs her necromancy book and slowly and painfully infect anzu with the worst of curses diseases and poisons till her mind cracks from the pain and still she continues then she grabs a special crystal that turns allt he pain into excrusiating pleasure for yami so hes enjoying himself as well as yugi while shes in absolute agony the greater the pleasure for the boys the greater the pain for her then she places her hand on anzus ruined mind then brings it back then shuts it down then uses her magic to turn anzu intoa mindless soulless puppet under her complete control but fully aware of the humilation shes going through even though she can do nothing to stop it and forces her to get down on every single last guy on earth and to become the human toy for guys world wide* there now her body is slowly being killed by the very thing shes loves to do slut around now its yur turn yugi
Y: ok *summons up the powers of the shadow realm and inflicts dmg upon dmg at yami then infects his mind with visions of submision forcing him to believe he has to submit till finally he does and is under yugis complete control then he creates a love potion so pumped with lust that yami would start creaming his pants just to have yugi look at him and makes him drink the potion till hes naught but a slave to yugis whims through the entire day you could hear sounds of absolute pleasure as yugi spends some time with his new toy* thanks red dragon now i get ya
RD: not a problem yugi just have fun and speaking of fun great new chappies for this ficcy Shwarz i hope you update soon and sry for the cut off of my last review but unfortunately i had a storm come in that night well keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh...that was so freaking awesome!! Yugi is totally bad ass! I love it! Please get another chapter out soon?
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! *screeches* I LOVED IT! This was incredible! And I normally hate stories when Yugi and Yami are paired with anyone other than themselves...and here Marik with Yugi (a pairing I've never even dreamed of) and I'm completely in love with it...^.^
And I personally love Yugi's attitute. XD He's still sweet...you can tell...but...he's got attitute now. XD I was cracking up at the "fight" he was in with Marik. Awesome job! Please update soon! ^^
And I personally love Yugi's attitute. XD He's still sweet...you can tell...but...he's got attitute now. XD I was cracking up at the "fight" he was in with Marik. Awesome job! Please update soon! ^^
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn, this fic is so fucking sweet. i just love this yugi! i cant wait to read more. *holds up a flag saying: YUGI X MARIK 4 EVA, BIATCHES!!* ^__^
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Too bad, I was hoping for a YamiYugi. But Still, even though I can't stand Yugi paired with anybody else, I admit this is well written and a nice fic overall. I'll come back sometimes later to see how it goes *spins you in the air*
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*puts hand on chest*
Im proud say this is a very amusing fic.
I cant wait for more.
Im proud say this is a very amusing fic.
I cant wait for more.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Technically, if this person didn't like Yuugi's character because it wasn't "canon" enough for them, then they shouldn't be reading Yaoi... because as much as we all love it, no it isn't canon. I love the way you've portrayed Yuugi. He IS not a weakling, or a wimp, even in canon. So it's nice to see him being portrayed as a strong character. And while his sudden burst of vengeance isn't quite in character, well, it's called people don't stay the same their whole live... and betrayal tends to have a bit of an effect on people's personality...
Okay so what I was trying to say with all of my rambling and babbling, is that yes, your Yuugi is well done, and I love him. So good job, keep writing and all that. ^^
Okay so what I was trying to say with all of my rambling and babbling, is that yes, your Yuugi is well done, and I love him. So good job, keep writing and all that. ^^
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is getting better and better! Even if when I'm a true YamixYugi shipper I like your fanfic! Please let it be a MarikxYugi! I kind of like the idea of the two of them being together! Please continue soon! *begging on hands and knees*
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no Yami/Yugi pairing, huh? ^^U