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for Kimi ga Iru

by Kugatsu

person Rachel Dracon
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huh, Bakura got all worried (in his own way) about his hikari. Wonder what he'd say if Ryou moved out, lived with Yami or something. Gah! *glomps* Two new chapters! ^.^ The Yugi/Marik thing WAS hot, and I wonder what's gonna happen with Yami and Ryou (if anything of note is going to happen). Wish I could leave a longer review, but my time is limited, suffice to say, it was great, can't wait for more!
person Rachel Dracon
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Bakura and Marik are fuckin' hilarious. I like that none of them can cook, so they're down to microwave meals until Ryou's back. Man, I'm of the opinion that everyone should be able to cook, at least the basics, microwave food is just not nearly as good for you. My older sister taught me to cook a long time ago, and once I picked up the basics I watched her do the more complicated stuff, and now I'm a good cook. Shit just tastes better if you make it yourself. Heh, now Yugi's got Marik thinking about him. It was sweet when he said sorry to Yami, but damn straight he hasn't forgiven them! You can't just let people think they can get do shit like that and then all will be well. I like the relationship between Marik and Malik, it's kind cute and kinda fucked up. Malik seems pretty unstable, and I like they way you've got Bakura acting, makes it hard to tell if you've got an intended Bakura/Ryou thing or an intended Bakura/Malik thing. It's sad Ryou really seems to believe everything his yami has told him though. Dude, such fast updates; you are GOD! ^.^
person Zoe
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! *snickers* Even though he'd never admit it, that was so sweet of Marik. ^^; He really is nice. :D That was so great...thankies so much for four chapters! ^____^ Can't wait to see the sequel!
person Velvetina
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Major cool chappies. Damn I'm gonna miss so much, see I'm going away for a week and cos you update so often think how much I'm gonna miss cos I'm not gonna have access to a stupid bloody computer! Anyways untill I can read this again, thank you once more for a truely enjoyable read, I love this fic so much now and it is easily one of my all time face Yugioh fanfics!
person Rachel Dracon
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, the clocks are damn funny, and it's nice to see Marik taking Yugi's temper tantrum seriously. Heh, the reason I review so much is probably due to the fact that you DID say two chapters a day, so I check this story a lot. I really dispise waiting somtimes, so if I don't have to wait, why wait, eh? Or something like that... And I could just review every fourth chapter or something, but hey, I've got time (not really), and the fic is good. Should be working on my own three fics though. It'd be nice to be able to update as fast as you do. That really fucking sucks for Bakura though, not to mention I bet he's pretty pissed off. Weird that Ryou would kiss him and enjoy blowing him if he only thought of him as a brother though. Marik/Yuginess was hot, and I wonder if Yami's pissed about that.
person vee@partlycloudy.com
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've never read a Marik and Yugi fic before, so I was intrigued when I came across this one. I really love this story, and I think the angle you've got with Yugi is interesting. It's nice to see him kick ass for a change. ^_^

If you're open to taking requests with the side pairings, though, can I please vote against Yami and Ryou? That's honestly the only couple I absolutely hate and won't read, and it seems you're taking that route. Other than that, I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Zacarane
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better! I love this fic! Finally some progress between Yugi and Marik! Although a bit of Seto and Yugi wouldn't be to bad either! *evilgrin*
Anyway continue soon!
person darkchan
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii desu yo! Okay... now I think that I might get cavaties from the end of the chapter. ^^ Might I also add, I love the Marik/Yuugi aspect of the story. Is so very good. So yeah. *coughcoughwritemoresooncoughcough* ^^;
person Velvetina
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude this two a day rule is freaking awsome...and I loev your writing! *glomp*sorry majorley hyper I'm on these random pill thingys and hell knows what they out in it but I go mad! These couple of chappies seriously rocked although the Yami/Ryouness was a surpirse, ok so I guess i could've seen the fluffyness between those two coming. Also I feel sorry for Seto, and sacred as I am to say it, I would love to see more Seto, espcially if it means that Seto gets to meet sumone and get over Yugi...but what ever my thoughts are don't let the squick with your story, though I can't imagine you would. The ending of that last chappie seriously cracked me up, so funny! LOVE IT!
person Kugatsu
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, two a day. I must say I produce some lovely work in the early morn....THANX FOR ALL THE SUPPORT GUYS! I think four more chapters and this puppy will be done then i'll work on a sequel, but that depends on how much time I get with the computer. ^w^