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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read, on AFF or just Fanfiction.net. You have a real knack for writing. I've been reading, and am proud to say I have read all of your Yu-Gi-Oh fics, and hope that you update the unfinished ones soon. I read in your profile that you want the chracters and their feelings to become real to the reader, and I must say, you succeeded...in my case anyway, can't speak for anyone else. Keep up the good work!
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story --> pretty good! I like the twist of Yugi finally growing a set. The pairing is good too: it's refreshing to read one that is not Yami X Yugi.
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... I just read this whole thing, and now am off to see the sequesls. Beautiful. Seto and Yugi... not so much. But I love the Bad Boy Yug thing. It was awesome. And Marik.. Gods, I loved him! This was one frekin awesome story!!!
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just Awsome! I just read this a second time just for fun
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u bitch!!*wipes away tears of anger* I can't believe you put my little Yugi in so much pain!! What did he ever do to you?! I can't believe his friend would do this to him!! Oh and by the way I was pissed when you said Yami was a better dualer that not true Yugi is just as good as yami and if you'd watch the show you'd know that!!* falls down and cries* i can't believe anyone would want to hurt my sweet, wonderful, little Yugi...I am so gonna kick that Anzu's bitches ass!! Don't worry yugi AVENGE YOU I WILL!!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....wow...wow...you roc~k...wow...wait You abused Yami and Yugi relationship you evil fuck....Sorry but you and this story still FUCKIN ROCKS!Next story make make sure it's YAmixYugi or MarikxYugi now I'm about to read the sequel and it better be good.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story I just cant get into the sequel its to messed up....
but you are a good umm novelist(is taht what it be?)
anyways keep up the good work.
but you are a good umm novelist(is taht what it be?)
anyways keep up the good work.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, kitchen timer... Hot ending chapter! Although Ryou's comment Bakura was pretty painful, damn! I actually read the first chapter of the sequel before I wrote this, so, great sequel, and overall, wonderful story!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: wooot DAM that is soooooooooo hot hehe yes Shwarz despite populare belief i can follow and enjoy and marik yugi couple hehe yugi needs it beyond past time he got some "fun" in his life after being screwed over by his so called yami and that FUCKING SLUT OF A BITCH *cackles* now onto lesson two now weres my pupil YUGI WERE ARE MY DEMON ANGEL
Yugi: here Red and rdy for more torture lessons
RD: ok now next up we work on mental torture now got ur victim rdy * looks at anzu aka her victim* i got mine rdy
Yugi: yup yamis all ready to go and is it alright if add ryou hes starting to piss me off
RD: sure more the marrier for us now mental torture focus on there weaknesses now for Anzu total bitch wants everything her way and if she dosnt get it she does what she does best bitches about it well lets see how she tolerates it going in reverse for her instead of her bitching others will bitch and complain at her watch * sends mental images at anzu were every time she opened her mouth shed get ridicouled sent to the principles office at school grounded for months at home and every just wants to tape her mouth shut to stop her bitching and tears start falling from her closed eyes* and vuala instant mental pain and ill do more to suit her ok now first up Yami now what do we know that he cant stand
Yugi: well he hated what happened to me after his duel with Rapheal
RD: correct hes hates hurting you so send him that
Yugi: ok *sends images to yami were at every turn hes sees him being the soul reason yugi cries or gets angry for every scare and mental and emotional abuse yugi ever "went through" and it loads him with guilt and he groans in pain of his torn heart* wow that worked great
RD: yup now ryou he wants more then anything to believe his yami is trustworthy and loving show him naught but lies then
Yugi: right *sends images of Bakura mocking ryou about his love for him beating him up and treating him like a piece of rock stuck in his shoe rather then the so called "younger brother " thing ryou is going for and he starts screaming in pain* hahah hows it feel bastard
RD: fun isnt it yugi
Yugi: yes its quite fun what else can we do
RD: watch and learn and be creative for example *sends rock music each more dark and sinister till shes utterly consumed by its negative message showing her to be the true witch she really is* now ur turn yugi
Yugi ok *sends the shadow realm to feed yamis darkness to make him utterly grotesque and for ryou to fall into a pit of utter despair* hey that was fun so whats my next lesson Red
RD: next we learn how to use necromancy to torture them now run along
Yugi: ok Red thanks *leaves the castle (btw in my domain i live in a castle with several torture chambers*
RD: later yugi ok now Shwarz keep u the great work and send more hottness our way we WANT MORE hehe gtg now update soon and again keep up the great work gtg now JA NE ^__^
Yugi: here Red and rdy for more torture lessons
RD: ok now next up we work on mental torture now got ur victim rdy * looks at anzu aka her victim* i got mine rdy
Yugi: yup yamis all ready to go and is it alright if add ryou hes starting to piss me off
RD: sure more the marrier for us now mental torture focus on there weaknesses now for Anzu total bitch wants everything her way and if she dosnt get it she does what she does best bitches about it well lets see how she tolerates it going in reverse for her instead of her bitching others will bitch and complain at her watch * sends mental images at anzu were every time she opened her mouth shed get ridicouled sent to the principles office at school grounded for months at home and every just wants to tape her mouth shut to stop her bitching and tears start falling from her closed eyes* and vuala instant mental pain and ill do more to suit her ok now first up Yami now what do we know that he cant stand
Yugi: well he hated what happened to me after his duel with Rapheal
RD: correct hes hates hurting you so send him that
Yugi: ok *sends images to yami were at every turn hes sees him being the soul reason yugi cries or gets angry for every scare and mental and emotional abuse yugi ever "went through" and it loads him with guilt and he groans in pain of his torn heart* wow that worked great
RD: yup now ryou he wants more then anything to believe his yami is trustworthy and loving show him naught but lies then
Yugi: right *sends images of Bakura mocking ryou about his love for him beating him up and treating him like a piece of rock stuck in his shoe rather then the so called "younger brother " thing ryou is going for and he starts screaming in pain* hahah hows it feel bastard
RD: fun isnt it yugi
Yugi: yes its quite fun what else can we do
RD: watch and learn and be creative for example *sends rock music each more dark and sinister till shes utterly consumed by its negative message showing her to be the true witch she really is* now ur turn yugi
Yugi ok *sends the shadow realm to feed yamis darkness to make him utterly grotesque and for ryou to fall into a pit of utter despair* hey that was fun so whats my next lesson Red
RD: next we learn how to use necromancy to torture them now run along
Yugi: ok Red thanks *leaves the castle (btw in my domain i live in a castle with several torture chambers*
RD: later yugi ok now Shwarz keep u the great work and send more hottness our way we WANT MORE hehe gtg now update soon and again keep up the great work gtg now JA NE ^__^
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll hold you to that sequal, great story