rate_review Reviews

Hey, there. I've read a few of your other fics, I think, on FF.net. I think it's you, at least. It's probably not you, but then again....anyway, fancy story. I got kind of confused in the middle, and was like, "Whuh?" but then I got it towards the end, and I was like, "Oh, yeah!" so....right. Mm-hm.

This is actually the first time I've reviewed a fic on here...interesting that it's this one. I won't say that the thought of Gozabura and Pegasus is an especially enticing one, but I do admire that you had the guts to do it, and do it well. I've actually read many of your fics on here, and you are the best writers of Pegasus I've found. I think a lot of readers and writers don't appreciate what an interesting character he is, and when he is featured in a fic, a lot of his intricacy, depth, and charm is completely lost. I really appreciate your portrayal of Pegasus in this story and your others as well. Keep up the good work :)

Another good one from you. I like the idea of a Gouzaburou/Pegasus pairing, but I could never figure out how to do it.
You've done an excellent job with the emotions involved... (5 stars!)

Have you read the stories in the doujinshi Alucatraz 1 and/or 2?