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for Freya's Snare

by Nichol

person lady_dinamite
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story!update soon!
person Christina
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story!! I love it! I cant wait to see what happens!
person Alisi
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ko. :) This chapter was deep and I enjoyed reading it. :) You do write good lemons. :) Keep up the good work. :)

Talk to you later. :)

Alisi T.
person ivorycoral
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FREAKING A! You've got me hooked. Now I wanna know what happens. This first chapter is a great set up for the story. I've read other stuff you've written and I have to say, I'm impressed. You've got a real knack for drawing the reader in, you know, making them feel like they can see, hear, smell, taste, and feel everything that is going on. That's pretty tough to do. Keep writing, like I said, I wanna know what happens. P.S. could you R/R some of my stuff? ivorycoral is my penname. Thanks and keep up the good work!
person Alisi
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ko :) Great chapter 1. :) Hope you get around to two soon :)

Update :)

Alisi :)