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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, I couldn't get past chapter 2.
According to your description this should be a Yuri fic. You should have at least warned about the huge amounts of Kisara/Seth at the beginning, because I honestly didn't want to have to go through all that to get to my Kirasa/Isis.
I don't mean to be rude, but please, tag it right so people who can't stand a pairing won't have it shoved down their throats for nothing.
According to your description this should be a Yuri fic. You should have at least warned about the huge amounts of Kisara/Seth at the beginning, because I honestly didn't want to have to go through all that to get to my Kirasa/Isis.
I don't mean to be rude, but please, tag it right so people who can't stand a pairing won't have it shoved down their throats for nothing.
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story, please update soon. Isis x Kisara, awesome.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the girl-on-girl action, that was friggin' hot. I appreciate your accuracy about ancient Egypt too. It pisses me off to no ends when author's do not do their homework. Bravo! Splendid work!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story; it isn't a pairing that you see a lot of, and I like that. The whole drama with Kisara and her foreign-ess (yeah, I have finals. I'm not making much sense right now) is also very suspenseful. What country is she from? My bets are on Lesbos in the Greek archipelago, or some Scandinavian country.
Also, I'm really, REALLY glad that you've done so much research ^________^ I'm very much into the history of the ancient world, so it bugs me when people have stuff happening in their fics that is completely unrealistic for that time period. Granted, it's just fanfiction, but...a good author can incorporate history into their writing. And that is what you have done here.
And make them have sex ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;; That would make me very happy.
Also, I'm really, REALLY glad that you've done so much research ^________^ I'm very much into the history of the ancient world, so it bugs me when people have stuff happening in their fics that is completely unrealistic for that time period. Granted, it's just fanfiction, but...a good author can incorporate history into their writing. And that is what you have done here.
And make them have sex ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;; That would make me very happy.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fanfic. It's by far one of the best here. Instead of pointless lust (which, sadly, my lemons have), you've structured a plot and incorporate character development. Plus, your writing skills are amazing. You are an EXCELLENT writer, and I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up with the great work!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Isis x Kisara, and this fic is written so well! Please continue ASAP ^^
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's was good update soon!!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One hell of a good first chapter, left me craving even more. So I say keep going you're one the very *chuckles* right track!
Good luck writing the next chapter... *winks and waves*
Good luck writing the next chapter... *winks and waves*