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WOW!! I JUST READ ALL THE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY, AND I THINK YA GOT THE MAKEINGS OF A GRATE STORY HERE....I TOTLAY LOVE YOUR WORK BY THE WAY, AND HOPE THAT YOU'LL BE ADDING MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY REALLY SOON , CAUSE I TRUELY CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT....ANYHOO KEEP UP THE GRATE WORK O.K.

ahhh that's what I was waiting for. ^_^ that was so sad and so perfect! yugi's one of my fav characters so i want him to be tortured! mwaha! but i want yami to come rescue him in the end so that they live all happy together. but angst. i want more. yes. excellent work. i await the next chapter eagerly. XD

~OsaP

Poor Yugi. I can't wait for the next chapter. xx

please update soon....thx

*kills something* dammit! treat yugi better u damned lazy-ass family of white bastards! >_< me? passionate? no....

i luv this fic already. it's developing really nicely so far and i, of course, wanna know wat happens to our dear yugi and yami too. i also like how fast the chapters come out. u update a helluva lot faster than i do, thas for sure. well keep up the good work. ciao!

Ooh, interesting update. I like Makoto, he's better at least than a lot of the other humans. Yami's wondering why the elves never brought the fight to the human town made me wonder too, and scene where he tripped over an elf was nicely done, him being polite enough not to get in trouble with his father while still managing to give the elf a hand, even if it was just for a moment. Now that Yugi and Yami have seen each other, can't wait to find out how they'll end up meeting, or to see how Yugi's treated by others when he starts doing his job. Update again soon please! ^.^

Ooh, a good start, very nice. I enjoyed the telling of how the elves were captured, it got the point across without being too long or tedius. You've got quality writing and you set up nice solid characters with that first chapter. I like the man who owns the bar, he doesn't seem too bad, though I might be wrong. Wonder what will happen next, if Yami will pull some rebellious things with his father. Was quite amused by his habit of picking on all the pathetic assholes who follow him around for money. Please update this again soon!

Wow...interesting...what happen next? Please update soon. ja ne

Oh poor Elfin Child! Great start, Update soon, (Smiles)