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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* Sniff, wow, this is really sad:( Poor Yugi! Damn Yami, go save him and apologize, lol:P Please update soon, this is great:)
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very dark...very deep and moody...I LIKE IT!...I kinda want to know the aftermath...maybe revert to the past and expand on what happened with Yami and Yugi(who I'm assuming was the POV...) ...I would also kinda like to see it rubbed in Yami's face for what he did to Yugi, to drive him to commit suicide...but to end this rant, I REALLY LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE AND I HOPE TO READ MORE!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have an idea who it is, but I think that you should continue. I would like to see the reaction of his so called friends when they find out what happened. Will they not care? Was it all a big joke? Excerera. Keep up the good work. This was well writen.
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More poetic than fictional IMO. Rather sad and partly a wee bit odd (mainly the chainsaw bit) which is cool. Would need some work on the transitions from event to event and another read-through to eliminate a few minor problems but other than that a nice first effort. Keep them coming.