rate_review Reviews

Hey so far so good. I am really liking the way that you are writing Jou's train of thought.I can't wait for him to find the camera or Seto to give in and go to him. Keep up the good work. L8r Catts

Awwwwww, seto listening to Jou while he's sleeping and imagining what he looks like... that's soooooooooo cute. I love the idea.

And I liked how you kind of portrayed Jou here without jumping right into action (like letting him remember the rape instead of having Seto watch it) because it brings us closer to Jou, whereas showing it directly and so early in the fic would kind of destroy the story. I mean, it's just my opinion, but I think you doing great when it comes to timing and the question of how much do we want Seto to know just yet. It also keeps the whole story far more interesting because everybody's gonna want to know what'll happen next.

As to CSI and profiler, I think both jobs are really interesting but I guess I'd prefer being a profiler since they don't necessarily have to deal with bodies all that often, hehe *gets scared easily*

Of the shows I like CSI way better though. Even the Miami team, but of course I prefer Grisom and the original team.

YOU ACTUALLY UPDATED!! yay!! I was so happy when I saw you gave in another wonderful chappie! update soon! *mwah* Kaiba's a funny stalka' oo.

Thats really good :) Great idea :D

lol haha thats a great idea!
lol XD oh but b4 i 4get i just wanna tank u 4 replying or talking to us...if that makes anysense at all... lol oh well so yea.
okay. my user name is GS*. it came from GoldenSun. lol i fell inlove with that games. XD yea i'm weird. such a good game. XP. hehe. and the little start thingy is like a sun? lol XP.
okay i shall now comment on ur fic! it was really good. lol Kaiba the silent stalker .
and was that a laugh? GASP! O_O lol. i'd b funny if Jou got a bit "excited" thinking about Kaiba and then started to do erm..."things" and Kaiba was there to watch the whole thing....XD ahah dont mind me. XP
oh and i just wanted to ask. where did u go. 4 the exchange student thing i mean. that kool haha XD well have a safe trip!!!!! ^________-

this is a fun one. I just love it.

It's good! Really good! Yeah, things are going to get interesting I presume... if it would be okay, can you drop me an email when you update? I'd really appreciate it! =) Thanks!!

Hi! Great story! True that the chapters are short, but they are still interesting, amusing, and kinda suspenseful. I hope you update again soon!

As for the username thingy, well...I'm pretty pale, you see. Not as pale as Ryou or Bakura, but nearly. And my great-grandparents are from Egypt. So, I guess that makes me part Egyptian.

Anywho, I really enjoy your stories and hope you can update more!

C ya!

kewl!! I like it. alot. its funny, and cute. update soon.

i really like dis fic and think da idea is kl and original
update soon id love 2 read more