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I really enjoyed this story - very creative. Thanks for the good read.

Alright, hello first of all. I haven't been on this website in so long... My god. But hey, I used to like Seto/Jou...I'm kinda catching up from my lack of attention to these cuties.... ^^;; I want you to hyperspeed the next chapter out! This is adorable... Hehe... Denial, Denial Seto... Keep it coming....Only the more shock from that first kiss hehehe.... *Yawns* I'm extremly tired, and I think I'm going to relax for a bit... But when I get up!! I WANT SOME MORE CAMERA, ALL IN THE LIFE OF JOEY ACTION!! ^^ Thanks, keep going here.

~Toralyn Skyelene Teinill

Muwahahahaha! And with that jealous growl, it really begins. Heh heh heh. This is brilliant, and looks like it's going to get more so as it continues. So continue it already! *pokes you*

Aww! Kaiba's jealous! lol I like this story so much! it's very interesting. You know I think you mentioned it on the first chapter I was expecting this to be humerous but who likes a stereotype right? Although I wouldn't mind lmao at these two boys. ^-^ I'll be waiting for your next update anxiously! Ja ne!! ^^

Another good chapter. I really enjoy how all of Joey's life isn't open for Kaiba to view. Like how you have his thoughts instead of actions, so that Kaiba still doesn't know a lot about him. My only complaint is that the story is beginning to slow. I'm not asking for Kaiba to jump up, save Joey from his father, and then having them declare their undying love for each other. I'm just saying that something intersting should happen, so that the chapter stands out and isn't just a filler. The idea of a soccer ball flying towards Joey and then hitting him made me chuckle. And I like chuckle. It makes me laugh. Lol. Good job again and good luck.

Vapid B.

lol, yup, always good to know I'm scarin, UH! "encouraging" the masses to do their best! ^o^

I love it! OHHH!! Kaiba is jealous! IN AMERICA'S FACE MWAHAHAHAHAH! but sweety, WHAT ARE JOU'S THOUGHT OF SETO!?!?! AND WHO THE HELL IS SETA?? AND WHY IS HE SUSPICIOUS?!?!o.O hmmmm? anyways, i like it do please update soon!

CIS need profilers too....diffrent kind then FBI but there still profilers

Oh...gomen...-_-...to answer your question, I would rather work in the "profiling" field because I feel more comfortable with the psychological side rather than the graphic side (i.e. bodies), but only the autopsy part, I'm not worried about viewing the crime scene. Like you, I feel I can read people pretty well. I already know there are sick bastards (sorry for the language) out there and what they are capable of so by knowing what to expect from them, I feel I can handle them. So, ummmm, yeah... - -
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lol. haha. sry 4 the long review. i lke to ramble on too....hehe. yea.
hrmm...if i had to choose i would choose CSI. just because i think its kool. its like solving a mystery. like finding out all the clues and u have to be in the mind of the criminal. its like a big puzzle....except people die in this one. i wasnt really in to the show CSI but the my sis forced me to watch it and it was kool. she's obessed with those show. mystery murder ect. the list goes on and one. u should watch svu. its good too. hehe. look at me rambling on again.
well i really like the story. haha and dont worry about the lemon and limes. XD i just really wanna c when Jou goes home and Kaiba see's how bad Jou has it. i love stuff like angst. i'm weird. XP.
and i wanted to go to michigan but i dont travel much. lol. i live in New York city. the big apple.. XD haha. okay enough rambling. sry 4 the loong ass comment again. aghh i must stop this madness!!!!!!! >_<

yay, u updated
i love dis fic....its sooo sweet
poor joey though, i dont like seeing him hurt
update soon