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for Egyptian Ara

by Diayma

person Luca
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Not a nice cliffhanger~!!

Update!

And I think C with tiny bits of A would be good.
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wnat to knw why jono frecking out so hurry and put the next chapter PLEASE
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
must have the nest chapter
person Mary
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I thought it was a really good story and it was very interesting. I think that for the flashbacks, you should do Seto and Jou. This is very good, please update soon, thanks.
person dianna
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like you this story i hope that youwill finish it because I want toread what happens in the story
person ...
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.....*squeals*.....that was so good!....*stares at the computer, waiting for more to magicaly appear*.........*hits computer*.........(ten minutes later)............................................................................STUPID PEICE OF CRAP!!!!!!!I KNOW YOU HAVE THE REST OF THE STORY IN THERE SOMEWHERE!!!!!!!.............. [computer: .......]........DON'T GIVE ME THAT!!!!! IF YOU DON'T GIVE ME THE REST OF THIS AWESOME STORY......ILL RIP OUT YOUR CABLES!!!!!!!!........[computer:.......]........*takes out baseball bat and hits computer*.........HOW'D YOU LIKE THAT?! HMM? THAT'S WHAT I THOUGHT!!! NOW GIVE ME THE REST OF THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........[computer:....*screen goes blank*]......WHAT! NO! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME! *starts to cry*.........i'll wait patiently for the next installment!!........JUST DON'T DIE ON ME!!!!!!!.......[computer: beep.....*screen comes back on*.......]......*callapses in releif*......thank you......thank you............*looks up*......oh yah!....i'm reviewing!.....*breaks out in a grin as if nothing was ever wrong*.......great story^^ i hope you continue it because it's.....ummmm.....a really great story!^^.........so, i'll be waiting patiently for the next chappie!^^........have a good day!......*walks away whistling to herself, unaware that peole are looking at her crazy*.......[people: does she have a split personality dissorder?.......]
person aliascatts
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story so far. I hope that the stress levels are still okay with you. I really like that you gave Jou a yami. I hope to see more of this soon. I am looking forward to seeing how the reunion of Jono and Seth goes. L8r Catts
person maggiemay
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh very very nice. A clean easy read with a clear plot. I am so enjoying this story.

Maggiemay
person Jadejj
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story glade you feeling better good luck on your fic
person fiby
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWSM, MAN! can't wait till you up date!