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by Hideki LaShae

schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
adorable. especially the bit at the. Kudos
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I love the little part at the end.
person Calcifer
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahaha! Funny stuff. lol suspended in midair? ... *speechless* I don't think anyone else has EVER thought of that one...

Keep up the good work!

~Angel
person lo
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fun! Nicely done, and very hot.
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This fic was so awsome! And I LOVE Bloodhound Gang's SONG!!! JOEY X SETO FOREVER!!
person yami
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey you ^^
your story was very cute!!! and funny... i had laughing alot^^

can you write a second part? pleace...

do you want to know something? ...
This story was the first english-yaoi story i have ever read ^^
(you must know that i'm coming from germany...)
okay..
ehmmm.. sorry for the bad grammer and spelling in this short comment.. .____.; my english advance-course teacher sad to every single work of me "girl, your grammer is a mess" i think she's right..

Bai Bai
Yami^^
person O_O;;
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was well-written, so I can't yell at you for poor grammar and such, but /c'mon/! Don't you think you should have a label on there for how ungodly OOC this is?
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice...! Awesome story... I like the idea of rich boy using all that money for something we can all enjoy. ^^ And I loved the parts with Joey being dominant... makes me all warm and fuzzy inside... ^^
person J.S.
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha
dat was so funny
da mating habits of animals...pure genius
u rock!
person Yamisgurl
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Luv this fanfiction it is so ausome. Joey and kaiba make a sexy couple!!!