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for Birthday bone

by akuchan

person nocturne
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...::shiver:: holy shit...that was hot. ^.^ I DEMAND more!!! if you don't mind, of course. ^^
person kura
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm..soo goood.

I vote for a sequal! lol. All those in favour?...
person cas
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! you are going to continue this... riiiiiiiiiight? It's not right to leave it hanging like that! Lol. ^_^ If you do decide to make a sequel or somethin' e-mail me k? Lol. Peace Out,

CC
person icestar
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoo! lemon! very nice story ^_^ its very cool.

:thumbs up:
person Rroselavy
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm ... delicious! I think you really captured Jou's personality well! The dialogue is is really good.
person Mu-chan
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kai-san was playing a children's song?
person Kugatsu
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww i likey
person euphoria
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. Especially the descriptions of Kaiba's "look". Can't wait for the next chapter!
person yellow bastard
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was thanking all the gods while I was reading this story, that I've never been in Jou's situation! I think I would dig a hole in the ground and hide there for a really long time.
Great story and update soon.