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this story doesn't have aa really good plot. it has basically no flow in it. for one thing the first chapter was a little weird it as like you didn't know how to start the stor so yo just made the werewolf to coincidentally go up to yugi and do that? try startng out a story by find the beginning, rising action, climax, lowering action and the resolution. remember, resolution doesn't alway have to be happy. so try some rough drafts before you actually start writing. hope you at least try one of these suggestions so you won't have such a hard time writing the next.

this story is rather odd....

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well hope to ess you soon bye bye

Oh god...Yami will not kill Yugi? Right?!?! Please update soon. Ja ne

hope you up-dated soon

So seto is a werewolf too...interesting...what happen next? Please update soon. Ja ne