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person PinkFlowerDog
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read alot of fanfiction, but this is my favourite so far!! I absolutely love this story! I dare venture to say it's perfect!! Great couples, GREAT lemon scenes, I LOVE the Yami/Yugi/Ryou trio!! (little yugi and ryou-how effing cute is that?) I will definitely be reading more of your work! Anyways, thanks for coming up with great stuff for us otherwise lazy people to read and enjoy!
person Sanibel
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written!
person maggiemay
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomps* You finished it! OOOH great lemon...*pants*. And Kitty Boys next...lol..does Seto make Jou purr? And does Jou make Seto YOWL? *smack* bad maggiemay. LOL

Maggiemay
person Kugatsu
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me likey! ^w^ it was great! poor Ryou huh? At least I'm not beatinghim in my fic...at least not yet...BWA HA HA
person Sana
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that it's sweet that Yugi and Atemu took Ryou into their house and showed him love... *smiles* Update soon... this is sweet...
person j.s.
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love dis fic
poor ryou and bakura
i nearly cried in one of da chapters
keep da gud work up
and update soon
i love da pairing...so sweet
person Silvershadowfire
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ignore the flamers, they're idiots. I think this is a great story; torture notwithstanding. Are we going to find out what's happening with Bakura in the meantime?
person Maggiemay
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whooo HOOO! You did that so well...drool...awesome threesome...hot...hot...hot...great job! Ignore the whinging biatches...and feel free to bitch. *Dies laughing* Lick me where I pee...gods girl I love it!

MMM
person bakurasgirl
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! A Ryou x Yami x Yugi! *claps and cheers* Very very well done! Very very hot! I was hoping to see one of these!
person maggiemay
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is such a good story. I am looking forward to Ryou getting some tender loving care from our boys...and that would show Bakura how to value his light or someone else will...