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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahuh right....
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chaps. continue soon.
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a cute battle. Pichu fits for Yugi!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
20 years old, huh?
i like your ideas, but you are indeed struggling with writing.
dont go writing stuff about little boys and their 'pipis' it gives the immpression that your a child-molesting pervert
your stories are choppy to put it lightly and you might want to move onto fics of a more proper maturity level for you,
say nice pokemon adventure fics on a kids website? because at the rate your going, thats all your competent to write.
i hate writing these, but if it will save you from future embaressment, im willing to try to put a stop to it....
this site is for real adult fics, and doesnt need an addition like this, its a little disgraceful...
again, i liked the idea i guess, but you may just want to drop this one..
i like your ideas, but you are indeed struggling with writing.
dont go writing stuff about little boys and their 'pipis' it gives the immpression that your a child-molesting pervert
your stories are choppy to put it lightly and you might want to move onto fics of a more proper maturity level for you,
say nice pokemon adventure fics on a kids website? because at the rate your going, thats all your competent to write.
i hate writing these, but if it will save you from future embaressment, im willing to try to put a stop to it....
this site is for real adult fics, and doesnt need an addition like this, its a little disgraceful...
again, i liked the idea i guess, but you may just want to drop this one..
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
She's no perv, she's just writing things that other authors are to bashful to say.
This chick is a good hearted hippy and I will not sit by and read bad things about
here writing or her! Mim, I understand what your saying, I hear worse when I'm at
work. Don't put Yamimi in the same catagory as Micheal Jackson!
This chick is a good hearted hippy and I will not sit by and read bad things about
here writing or her! Mim, I understand what your saying, I hear worse when I'm at
work. Don't put Yamimi in the same catagory as Micheal Jackson!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was funny...a pokemon that is awake when the trainer is sleeping...Ja ne