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yea i really like it so far
and r honda+otogi and yu-gi+yami da only couples already in a relationship?
update soon
id love 2 read more
;)

dat was really gud
and u can go ahead and use otogi's and honda's first names....
write more!!!

could turn out good...really good...
why not make them have a big nice gang bang? you are the author so you are god-like
nah, no need to use first name

hey,

I don't really know if you should use Honda's and Otogi's first names. Personally I think you should stick to their last names because they are... less horrible. But of course there's the issue of making the story believable. Evidently a couple wouldn't call each other by their last names. That's not the sweetest thing. So, in conclusion, use their first names when they interact with each other only.

I've liked the story so far, though this chapter was just an introduction. I really want to read more. I don't want to wait until you get 10 reviews! Update asap! I think that when you develop this story a bit more, you'll get more reviews.

Bye

Ha! that was fun, do s'more!

Please update!!! PWEASE!!! I like the beggining. You can use the first names of them. Ja ne