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OMG, you killed Marik and Jou!!! Oh I so wanted to cry with Malik and Baku. Ry should have told Yami.. aww

awww, what a great story!! I loved it. So sad but then it gets better. What a great epic this would make.

I'm so sorry that it has taken me this long to review this story. This is the 6 time that I've read it, and it actually made me cry...you should be proud. I haven't cried in a LONG time. I love this story very much, and read it at least once every two months...i love it so! ^^ This is one of my absolute favourite stories, and I hope ( even though it was a challenge ) that you make a sequel, or show a little bit of what went on with Malik and Bakura...I'll understand if you don't....^^ oh dear, this review is long...oh well...I'll review the next time i read Royalty again!

Forever Loyal

i was reduced to tears for the first time reading a fanfiction. Jou and marik dying was just horrible, i couldnt believe it when i read it.
I dont like reading about anyone being raped..
but other than that, it was a great fic.
I wont be reading it again because it was to unbelieveably sad.
Your descriptions of wounds and other things are very good, i could (unfortunetly) picture all of them.
(I would love to read a happy fic of yours, i will be looking around for one.)
It was good, dont get me wrong i liked it but..way to sad for me im sorry.
I was bawling my eyes out during Jou and Mariks funeral and i never cry. You should be proud. lol.


the Lemon was wonderful..and by lemon i mean the ones that were un-rape filled ones..
So, to sum up im having huge mixed feelings about this fic. Maybe its because i just finished it, and im still upset. *shrug*
I adored the last line too, "looking for his concience" that was adorable.
*smiles* Good work.

it's a beautiful story...though I must admit I almost gave up reading it when you killed Jou and Marik. In fact I skipped to the prolauge to see if you killed everyone since some authors have a way with ruining their own stories. In all fairness I hated your story only because it wasn't all happy ending and flowers, but it is well written and almost made me cry.

I enjoyed reading this with a great passion. I almost thought you weren't gonna finish this, I'm glad you e-mailed me. Its rare for me to find stoires that mess with my emotions and let me tell you this story did just that. Now I love Seto with a passion...but I never wanted him to die so badly like I did in this fic.

Seto's ghost: Well Nite..that's nice to know.

NN:SHUT UP! You were so cruel and mean to Malik and Marik! OMG! The beheaded thing I nearly fainted from shock, I screamed, I was not expecting that.

Marik's ghost: I know, I"m going to kick your non soild ass all over heaven and hell.

Seto's ghost: That's right you cant kick it, its not solid!

Jou's ghost: *Glares at Seto* Fuckin bastard.

Seto's ghost: *flips him off*

Marik/Jou's ghost: *engage in ghost kick ass Seto war*

NN: Yami and Ryou are so cute together, as well as Bakura and Malik...*sighs* oh man I loved your story. The twists, the drama, the sorrow, the happiness, just....wow..I applade you on. I really don't know what else to say, your story has left me with so man feelings...I dont think I've ever cried so much in a long time...wonderful, wonderful, words just cannot describe how much I enjoyed your story. I wish you good will and luck with your other stories.

~Nite Nite~

I really enjoyed this story =) it made me feel emotional at times and that's why i liked it...heh...great work!

I'm glad that I got to read the rest of this story. It was very good, though I do have to agree with one reviewer about one thing. I think that Bakura, and Malik went into their relationship rather fast. I can understand them clinging to each other for suport, as they had lost two people very dear to them, and I can understand Bakura's need to watch over Malik, as well as Maliks need to stay close to Bakura. Each of them need to be with some thing familiar and safe, and warm after such loss, and who better then the one person who can share your greif and loss. However, I don not think that they would fall in love so easily. I think that they may at first seek to heal each other, be it with their bodies, or just being with each other, as they need to heal from their loss before they can move on. Bakura and Malik moved on rather quickly, making it seem as if those that they loved had truely died with out being properly morned, and missed. I don't think that it would have taken them long to move on, as they were very good at living as the one they loved wanted them to. But a few days is far to short of a time. A few months, a year at most, and I could see their love for each other growing and changing. It seemed that the closer you got to the end the more you rushed it, and things did not work just right with the flow of the rest of the story. I would very much like to see a short sequel of this story though. One where they are all together, and where they are perhaps honoring those that they have lost in the past, who are happy for them moving on, and that is for all five of them, as Joey's sister is part of those that have lost some one close to them. Perhaps you could place them in the present (or future) where they are together once again, the friends, and lovers they once were. Other wize this story was well worth the time it took to read, the flow was very nice, and it kept my interests. I look forward to reading your other stories, and hope that you write more. Arigatou, and Ja ne.


~~Ravenstar

Heh, heh. I was looking back on the reviews of this story, and guess what. i found the story that I reviewed, this one. I belive I threatened to send you Bakura if you didn't update, silly me. i shall have to read the entire story and then make idil threats again. It's a habit. Most of the people I review for end up dealing with threats of being fed to hungy anime charies, or having sharp objects thrown at them.Though I do offer their favorite treat every once in a while for updating, so I'm not all bad.........


~~Ravenstar

Hello,

That was a wonderful story. I loved it. I hope you do a sequel.