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Thank you for updating. I enjoyed it very much. I can't wait for more. The only request I have...although I try not to make requests...can you show more of how YAMI is feeling. Right now we only have supposition and the bitch...but...well...I would love to know what yami is thinking and feeling...

Maggiemay

Heya, great updates and thanks for the heads up email. I guess my only comment besides "Loved it" would be that very early in this chapter, when Tea arrives, you had her repeat the phrase "keep you waiting too long" like three or four times... as much as I'm enjoying giving your characterization of her a chance, that just brought to mind the stereotypical annoying Tea we all know and loathe. Just trying to help! Anyway, ja ne, update again soon please!

suprisingly i like tea in your story and normally i don't. good job on that character development! hope to see more!

My heart goes out to Yami and Yugi! They both don't get what they want. Love is horrible when your love doesn'T know you exist!

please update soon......thx

*muses* Liked the Isis/Tea pairing! But WHY is Yami SO blind to the pain he's causing Yugi?! I thought with the soul link, he WOULD notice that Yugi's feeling suicidal! How will they get Yami and Yugi together? JUST how will Marik and Bakura chase Yami's partners away? What if Yugi resist, to their plans? Have Yami do the chasing when he wakes up! It's only fair, after all the grief he casued Yugi!

Wow this is something I can enjoy reading. Please update soon this is way to good to be stopped! Great story and chapter! Can't wait to see you chase away that damn Shachi what's her name. And I'd loved to be informed of when you update! ^^ Ja ne! ^____________________^

you know damn well I loved it!!!!!! And I'm still rolling from that chapter title!

Drac and the assembly

[blink blink] Tea and Isis? I don't think I've seen anyone else do that pairing. Sounds interesting.

I'm glad you listened to the reviewer and adjusted the story line. Having the characters make contingency plans and not just throw the two together but let them try to develop their relationship on their own shows real depth. And thanks fot not giving away what they're plotting, it keeps me on the edge of my seat :-D.

I love this story. I'm also getting into Unbreak My Heart but I haven't finished it yet. I will tomorrow though. I really hope you meant it when you said your muses were working overtime. I hope that you can get the next chapter out really soon, before I have to leave on the first of July. But don't stress out on my part. If there isn't an update by then, I'll just wait patiently for when I get back to my computer to read it.

On to the actual review:
Again, I love this story. I can't wait to see what you plan to do to Yami to get him to notice Yugi. I hope he feels really guilty for overlooking what was there all along. I can't wait for your update. Please make it soon!